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Deep Doo-Wop
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Deep Doo-Wop |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Deep Doo-Wop ~*Marge Tindal*~ Two-stepping so softly through the things that I do Sometimes it leaves me with 'stuff' on my shoe That thing that I wrote is one-heel-of-a-note Pinching my little toes leaving me a reminder on my two left feet of such need to be a little bit lighter making the world so much cleaner for those souls who so eagerly step behind me So that in my zest for life I never side-step the issue of need that others might have no matter how deep doo-wop-deedoodoowop-dee-doo To spread so sincerely and most certainly dearly the compassion of fashion to fit all hearts in sincere search of footprints of their own quiet making Knowing full-well I have room for growing into the sharing of shoe Must wade thru DeepDooWop in smaller step of you ~o~ *It's just been one of those days* Right, Vicky ? Tee-Hee! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 You are so clever! I never wear shoes like that..at -60F I have to wear 'Bunny Boots' (some term from the military, never did figure that one out yet) LOL No way to sidestep some of those problems. Wanna borrow a bigger shovel? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I wonder what ever happened to Doo-Wop! (sigh) I love it, I love it, I saw all the episodes on PBS about the history of it, it's so romantic and soothing! (smiles) Makes me want to dance to this beat too from your loving heart! (smiles) BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT, SWEET FRIEND!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
FIRST, would you Email me and let me know how you write in those figures. do you use MS Word? SECOND, and really foremost in my mind, I love the two step, three step, shuffle, waltz, swing, push .... well you get the idea. Here in Texas we clean up the barn before we dance so we doan step in DooWop, but we dance to it and the Cotton Eyed Joe  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MidniteSun~ LOL ... how's about sending that shovel with a Texas cowboy ! !  Noah~ Thanks .... just having fun with this one~ InterLoper~ Tee-Hee ! You owe me a turn around the dance floor~ I just draw it on my monitor and try to stay in the lines~  AND ... I've got this little bridge I want to sell you~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marge, I loved the presentation.......and the beautiful message held within.......your heart is glowing......*s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge---Sometimes, like now, I just want to borrow your boots...and walk around in them for awhile...I just know it would make me smile. Love you big!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ Thanks for liking this little *giggler*~ Martie~ Come on down ! ! I just happen to have an extra pair ! I love you B I G G E R ~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that was some dance you just did there, and yes, those form poems of yours amaze me, and sure are a signature associated with you alone Marge, fantastic. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marge! You are just too clever! It is such fun when you do one of these. I don't even want to know how, as it surely is part of your signature! ~hugs to ya! Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ohhhh Marge its always a pleasure to read your words of art, Like it a lot Charisma |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
A mighty good dancer you are! A groovy tap dance into our hearts! You're great Marge...I love these shape poems...have you ever done a shoe? LAUGH~ I know you probably could! Sincerely, Regina |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wise words, Marge! Beautifully creative presentation! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge....you thrill me with the way you can weave this into an image...a neat write... seems you have had quite a day. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marge, Me, I just seem to step in stuff that needs to be rubbed off at the curb. But this...wow! And so pleasing to the eye besides. Fun write, thanks. lc And by the way, how deep is that doo wop cause I think I stepped in some of that one time too. [This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-10-2001).] |
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