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Autumn (Will You Forget Me?)
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Autumn (Will You Forget Me?) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This is based on a current depression I'm having; my few close friends are moving on and I feel no one loves me anymore...)  Autumn By: Noah Eaton 11/8/01 I can't move I can't go out to play It's getting cooler Sadness ricochets across my face I watch and see my shadows consume me All my memories buried in the ashes of the spring All my flowers are dying I feel like I'm dying All my friends Would you hug me? Would you be there for me? I feel no one loves me My mind is filled with regrets Can I still push reset? Dear God, do you expect anything for me? Do yo still believe in me? All my friends Would you hug me? Would you be there for me? I feel no one loves me The leaves are falling again And tears are falling down my cheeks endlessly I only wish I could hug you, cry with you, talk to any of you But do you forget me? I can't stop crying on my bed I feel my heart has stopped beating If I was lost in the blizzard, would you take my hand? I feel my heart breaking... All my friends Would you hug me? Would you be there for me? I feel no one loves me All my friends Do you care for me? I need all of you now I feel no one loves me Anymore... Anymore... Anymore... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Dear Noah, you are definitely loved here by many. What a sad outpouring of emotion from a heart that is crying to be heard. Your words are heard and you are far from alone even though it doesn't seem that way. Lonely write, my friend. (((HUGS))) LW All writing comes |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Friends may come and friends my go, but enemies accumulate. And I sure don't see a big waiting line in that category for you. I heard your screams, and heard your shout. HUGS. Feel better now? |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Yes, Noah, I hear you and I understand why you write. Depression is a cancer of the mind. Please get some help and please keep writing. I never would have guessed but you know what? Most write the opposite of what they are feeling.....((((hug))))) -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
No season could forget one that sheds light and love! I as a person will not either. Love and Hugs! Sincerely, Regina |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah, You could not be forgotten. Your heart is pure and your soul is to sweet. You have plenty of friends here who offer a open heart and outstretched hand. Keep writing.. as you know it helps.. and I pray you feel better soon. You know my email if you need to talk. Big hugs to you, Tara  |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Noah, Such a sad write.I hope these emotions will pass for you soon.I will hold you in mthoughts and prayers.Know that you are loved and cared for by many here.You have touched my heart and soul since I have come here and I will never forget that.Someone with a heart as deep and true as yours could not be forgotten. ((((HUGS))))) Peaches |
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