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Dusk Songs
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Dusk Songs |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Dusk Songs for this, you must use mind's eye a bit of meander on the drive home awareness of all surround you letting the charm seep in of what asked ah, telephone wires, black lines lineating passages but wait, you’ve heard of singing wires conceive then the sky, twilighting comes duskily greeting then see telephone lines as light plays just right starlings becoming quarter notes hovering in fall’s rookery of gather, come to land Largo, a few leaving, La Paloma sifting along, add legs to your perceive, quarter notes move up and down a flutter of sharp comes flat accidentals spluttering Dark Eyes suddening a Nocturne of sound Barcarolle sounds as they move readying to join the Joyous Farmer and night claims their Merry Widow depart |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Huge (Thunderous Applause) Your verse is a stage of the most glorious vision of nature's happenings mixed with the art of composed rapture! Mind if I keep this like~Forever~!!!I'll never see another bird on a wire without hearing the notes you've versed.   Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Sooooooo beautiful and so sonnerous! (smiles) This is such a beautiful opus from your lovely heart! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I am in awe of your creative genius. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ This is just so wonderfully replete with imagery in your special style~ You know who would have loved this piece ? Our own sweet Wilfred Yeats would have just LOVED it~ It just strikes me as being a little message from him or to him~ Thank you for stirring a nostalgic memory~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Glenn Campbell could have had this in mind with Wichita Lineman.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
of what asked ah, telephone wires, black lines lineating passages but wait, you’ve heard of singing wires conceive then the sky, twilighting comes duskily greeting then see telephone lines as light plays just right starlings becoming quarter notes hovering in fall’s rookery of gather, come to land Largo, a few leaving, La Paloma sifting along, ================================ I must agree with Margies insight on this one... me thinks a "little bird" sang to ya on this one  your opening lines say to look with our minds eye.... looking at things thru yours proves that there is poetry everywhere if one would just be open to it........ this is a very very cool poem Sun... love the title.   |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ah once again your sun shines brightly and your verse is incredible!! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Exodus Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well aren't you the clever one  I could actually see that. Wonderful Sunshine.~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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