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dgvarner
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0 posted 2001-11-08 08:18 PM




has anyone seen that tricky girl
i find her briefly in a whirl
shes quiet now like a leaf without wind
when my time is short i miss my friend
i know shes out there looking in
i hear her whisper now and then
but find her inner soul, i cannot
is it guarded, or did i forget to knock
i wonder where she is today
i wonder if tricks would want to play
her smile has grown dim, her laughter faded
another day she masqueraded
i hope the sun warms her face tomorrow  
a day when she can shed any sorrow
a day when her heart remembers laughter
and her soul comes running after
i hope her smile she will reclaim
and her face her smile will stain
has anyone seen my tricky friend
i'd love to find her around the bend...


-dgvarner
11-8-01

just thinkin about ya tricks...  


~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"am i in too deep--
have i lost my mind?
i dont care--
youre near, tonite..."
-enrique

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 11-08-2001).]

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jwesley
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1 posted 2001-11-08 08:21 PM


Me thinks you see her all the time, my friend, Me thinks she lies within - and what a vision she is...


Loved this...

jwesley

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2 posted 2001-11-08 08:25 PM




(smiles) This is such a sweet tribute to our dear friend, sweet friend! (big hugggsssssss) I too love her work so very much just as I love yours! (smiles) Beautiful, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

dgvarner
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3 posted 2001-11-08 08:27 PM


JWESLEY..*smile*..i like your interpretation of this one..perhaps i should not have been adding things while you were replying..  
i liked your reply...makes me think..perhaps..just perhaps..i did write this partially for me..   however..i meant to write it to my friend tricks   (vlraynes)
thank you for enjoying  !

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"am i in too deep--
have i lost my mind?
i dont care--
youre near, tonite..."
-enrique

dgvarner
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4 posted 2001-11-08 08:31 PM


thank you NOAH!  you snuck in there..lol
youre such an upbeat addition to my poetry!  thank you for your sweet replies  
let me know if you find tricks!  

hugs, g

Parker
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5 posted 2001-11-08 11:38 PM


You have such a great heart. I hope tricks reads this.  

Parker

Titia Geertman
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6 posted 2001-11-09 07:01 PM


~~~~~~~
You just beat me to a tricker treat
Days and days I'm looking for this sweet
I miss her too and hope she is oké
Come on tricky lady come out and play

But maybe just maybe she has things to do
Maybe she just hasn't time for me and you
I've seen her pop in and out very quick
I hope dear tricky Vicky that you aren't sick
~~~~~~~

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

dgvarner
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7 posted 2001-11-09 07:21 PM


PARKER..you have a pretty great heart yourself..    
i just hope she's doin ok... when talking to her, i used to sign off with, "so..if you see parker..." (LOL)  and she knew what i meant...so now..i'll say to you.."if you see tricks.."  

TITIA..lol..cute  
*sigh*..i dunno..i keep losin the girl..! darn it..i once lost her for many years..that sucked..hope she's back before many years go by!  

thanks for reading!
hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"am i in too deep--
have i lost my mind?
i dont care--
youre near, tonite..."
-enrique

kaile
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8 posted 2001-11-09 10:29 PM


a charming heartwarming piece...ahhh, the value of friendship...
dgvarner
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9 posted 2001-11-10 06:27 AM


well....bummer..i had a msg in my email box that said kaile stopped by here...but i dont see you friend kaile...  ...

i'll say 'thank you', anyway..  

(the msg will prob show up after i post this..lol!)

hugs, g

kaile
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10 posted 2001-11-10 12:21 PM


lol..i hope my reply fulfilled your expectations...
dgvarner
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11 posted 2001-11-10 01:39 PM


KAILE..lol...  as always my friend..  
cpalmer
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12 posted 2001-11-11 10:04 PM


Dg,
I know what you mean...I miss her too   Haven't seen much of her lately and I miss those wonderful words she gives...Hope she comes back soon!
Hugs
Cindi

dgvarner
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13 posted 2001-11-12 12:25 PM


CINDI..arent you in the same town??  call the girl out of hiding!     thanks for reading..  

hugs, g

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