Open Poetry #16 |
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Sandalwood Remembrances |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
The gentle roam of sandalwood breezes passes through hillsides painted in red and gold a gesture to my soul to wander, in search of lyrical remembrances… I can only follow The quickening of my steps leads me to a place of recall where there I am gifted the hint of a heartbeat companion to my own. achildsheart 09-25-01 May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a gift indeed... may it always be so for you. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
a gesture to my soul to wander, in search of lyrical remembrances… Therein perhaps lies some peace...beautifully done. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very gently written and very much enjoyed.
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Enchantress, Duncan, Cpat, thank you for the great repiles. I do appreciate each one. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Whisper's, Very nice, I enjoyed. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahhh. . . the scent of memories. . . wonderfully done. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Seymore, Sven, thank you both, I am so happy you enjoyed this. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AWhispersCaress~ Ahhhhh, the fragrance of sandalwood wafting through your verse~ Lovely, lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I enjoyed this walk with you, as you worked the imagery well. ~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Marge, thank you, your comments always means so much to me. Mysteria, thank you, I am so pleased you liked this. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
May the hint become reality ![]() |
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