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The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

0 posted 2001-09-25 12:28 PM

              She is so far away
          Yet when I hear her voice
       I feel her soft breath on my neck
      And her tender caress on my cheek
     Absence makes the heart grow fonder
       And awakens the senses so much
      I can smell her scent in my mind
         And I can feel her whisper

RdanJ9/2001

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

[This message has been edited by The Rusty Knight (edited 09-25-2001).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-09-25 12:35 PM

Dan, this is truly beautiful! Oh...*sigh*..how gently and lovingly penned dear knight. Nancy Lee *S*

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

NightShadow
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since 2001-09-04

Posts 127
New Jersey

2 posted 2001-09-25 12:41 PM

wow.. this is really nice, very sweet

short but sweet!

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2001-09-25 12:47 PM

As it should be...well done.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-09-25 02:20 PM

Rusty~

*sigh* this is wonderful

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-09-25 03:34 PM

Fantastic expression...James

RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23

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Tulsa, OK, USA

6 posted 2001-09-25 04:06 PM

short but all too well understood.

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

7 posted 2001-09-25 06:38 PM

Thanks to all of you for your comments. This is one of those poems that drop in unexpected and sort of writes itself...to the ones of you that write a lot...does this happen more often the more you write?

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-09-26 06:47 AM

Dan~
This is just soooooooooo lovely~

Oh, Yes ! 'Drop in' is a good way to describe it ...
That's just the way it happens ~
Isn't it WONDERFUL ?
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2001-10-01 11:29 PM

Rusty Knight-
  This is really beautiful.
  Enjoyed it much!
  Hugs,
  ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Tennessee Angel
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since 2000-06-03

Posts 661
Tennessee

10 posted 2001-10-02 03:24 PM

This is positively lovely!

The brave may die...but the cautious never live...

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2001-10-02 03:45 PM

Such a soft and gentle write. I do so love the Texas gentleman. *s* This is wonderful. *Sighs*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

12 posted 2001-10-02 03:56 PM

absolutely stunning....

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

13 posted 2001-10-02 07:22 PM

I am glad you enjoyed it. I was one of those times when everything fit almost as it was typed...and was made even better by your comments...thank you Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

14 posted 2001-10-02 08:18 PM

Sir Dan,
When one feels this way,
one can scribe the perfect poem...
'tis all in the touch.

Thanking thee,
for a feeling of warmth,

Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

bonnie1961
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since 2001-09-30

Posts 44
ny, usa

15 posted 2001-10-02 08:36 PM

short, but VERY sweet. i really enjoyed it

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

16 posted 2001-10-03 10:47 AM

I love this..
Sandra

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

17 posted 2001-10-03 10:58 AM

Quietly gentle. Thank you.

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