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Stand Tall |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
He is gone yet I stand. I don't need him to warm my bed. He is missing but not missed. I can go on and thrive without him. I shed no tears. No man deserves them. Nor is he worthy of regret or second thoughts. I am strong in spirit and soul. Someday he'll realize what he has lost, but he will never get it back. For he will be replaced by someone superior who will be my equal. Or I will be alone, a pillar of femininity not needing a foundation on which to stand tall. "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Abigaile, I love the spirit of this, the strength. Now you just get yourself going and write another!!!! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Abigaile~ I really like the strength in this piece~ 'I am strong in spirit and soul.' 'a pillar of femininity not needing a foundation on which to stand tall.' Ahhhhhhh, WOMAN IS the foundation ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
what building can stand without a foundation? without a pillar? is a building anywhere held up by a single pillar? no, but by many. what then could this represent? community? or in this case, isolation and lack thereof. our greatest strength may be in community, and a growing relationship with god, who happens to be, by the way, the foundation up which to set your pillar. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Abigaile, I shall just say... thank you, this is beautiful! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This oozes strength "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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