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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-11-08 02:40 AM



When Tomorrow Won't Wait

~*Marge Tindal*~

Running headstrong away from yesterday,
I've stumbled close to tomorrow~
Falling face-down into the realization
that the moments are changing so quickly
I crawl through a briar patch of daily 'musts'
hoping tomorrow will wait for my arrival~
But ... sometimes, just sometimes
tomorrow doesn't want to wait
for the slow changing of my season
Please, 'Hold on - I'm coming'
I promise you, I am season-in-change
for all of our tomorrows~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2001-11-08 07:34 AM


I'm stuck in the briar patch.
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2 posted 2001-11-08 08:17 AM


interesting images and an interesting poem to ponder.... I enjoyed Marge!
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3 posted 2001-11-08 08:38 AM



How around you went through the fact that the year is almost over...

just yesterday we were talking chads...

today we talk of cads...

and I'm already composing Christmas notes...

hoping for a new year without fear....

ah, the way you make a mind wander...

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4 posted 2001-11-08 08:41 AM


Enjoyed reading this. Thank you for posting it.
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5 posted 2001-11-08 08:44 AM


Sounds like it's all ready here ...
ooops!!!, gone again.
The Briar Patch will get you everytime!!
Interesting write.

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6 posted 2001-11-08 10:18 AM


Sweet sister of my heart...your tomorrows will wait...just enjoy the now that was yesterday's tomorrow.  Hugs!

PS I know just what you mean!

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7 posted 2001-11-08 11:18 AM


enjoyed this, don't get a chance to read much but enjoyed the sense of happiness in it!
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8 posted 2001-11-08 11:30 AM


Tomorrow and tomorrow: sweet words, Marge. *SMILE*

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

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9 posted 2001-11-08 12:38 PM


Marge, this poem I can totally relate to sweetie...
There's those days when I just want2 stay in that 'patch' you speak of and then there are days when I get adventurous and walk 2wards the edge of tomorrows...
A keeper4meMyDearestFriend...
Thank you for a most enjoyed read...
*~coco~*

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10 posted 2001-11-08 12:46 PM


very clever write miss margie..  
hmm..i seem to be stuck in the briar patch too...its so very true, how tomorrow just doesnt want to wait sometimes--feels like it goes on without me..
"hold on - i'm coming"...exactly how it feels..if tomorrow could just hear me from the briar patch...*sigh*

much enjoyed..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"am i in too deep--
have i lost my mind?
i dont care--
youre near, tonite..."
-enrique

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11 posted 2001-11-08 01:50 PM


*Thanks everyone ...
I've enjoyed seeing what each one finds in this presentation~

SisterMartie~
Love n' hugs to all~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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