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When Tomorrow Won't Wait
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When Tomorrow Won't Wait |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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When Tomorrow Won't Wait ~*Marge Tindal*~ Running headstrong away from yesterday, I've stumbled close to tomorrow~ Falling face-down into the realization that the moments are changing so quickly I crawl through a briar patch of daily 'musts' hoping tomorrow will wait for my arrival~ But ... sometimes, just sometimes tomorrow doesn't want to wait for the slow changing of my season Please, 'Hold on - I'm coming' I promise you, I am season-in-change for all of our tomorrows~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
I'm stuck in the briar patch. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
interesting images and an interesting poem to ponder.... I enjoyed Marge! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How around you went through the fact that the year is almost over... just yesterday we were talking chads... today we talk of cads... and I'm already composing Christmas notes... hoping for a new year without fear.... ah, the way you make a mind wander... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Enjoyed reading this. Thank you for posting it. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sounds like it's all ready here ... ooops!!!, gone again. The Briar Patch will get you everytime!! Interesting write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sweet sister of my heart...your tomorrows will wait...just enjoy the now that was yesterday's tomorrow. Hugs! PS I know just what you mean! |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
enjoyed this, don't get a chance to read much but enjoyed the sense of happiness in it! |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
Tomorrow and tomorrow: sweet words, Marge. *SMILE* "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marge, this poem I can totally relate to sweetie... There's those days when I just want2 stay in that 'patch' you speak of and then there are days when I get adventurous and walk 2wards the edge of tomorrows... A keeper4meMyDearestFriend... Thank you for a most enjoyed read... *~coco~* |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very clever write miss margie..  hmm..i seem to be stuck in the briar patch too...its so very true, how tomorrow just doesnt want to wait sometimes--feels like it goes on without me.. "hold on - i'm coming"...exactly how it feels..if tomorrow could just hear me from the briar patch...*sigh* much enjoyed.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Thanks everyone ... I've enjoyed seeing what each one finds in this presentation~ SisterMartie~  Love n' hugs to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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