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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I was a house swept clean & abandoned my heart's memories & dearest hopes lay stifled beneath ornate coverings gathering dust like the earth, love had gone into hibernation praying for an early summer... I was both dead & alive watching through windows seeing nothing my own reflection so foreign I could not relate to the image nor the eyes I was a house abandoned swept clean & waiting praying for summer & finally it has arrived... ~Tier 11/01 |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh gosh do I ever know this feeling. You have said it so very well. Amazing and very true of how one is left feeling. BRAVO!!!  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes...Summer...time for passion to heat the fires of our hearts...and to allow love to return again. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Startime, and Magnus for reading and commenting. I greatly appreciate it! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh my gosh, this poem reminded me of my grandparent's house and the comeliness in the summer! (smiles) I know just how you feel, and a lovely spring cleaning is like the homecoming! (big hugggssssss) I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet R.T, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I was both dead & alive watching through windows seeing nothing my own reflection so foreign I could not relate to the image nor the eyes I know this feeling so well. Also, hoping for an early spring, which it felt like here today. Was almost tempted to turn all my calenders to April and see just how long I could fool myself. Great write, Tier. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*hugs* to you, Noah, thank you for your kind words. Duncan, let me know if that calendar thing works so that I can try it! *chuckles* thank you for taking the time to read & comment... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wow, wonderful work. I know exactly how you feel also. You describe it so well. All writing comes |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
open the windows my friend. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I would have to agree with Sven ... when things get that stale, for what ever reason, its time for something fresh.Perhaps planting something near the front door would be uplifting .... and indoor plants like ivy's give an "endless" effect. The house is only the shell, its what you have inside that makes it home. |
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