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Soft as a warm summer breeze in my ears
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Soft as a warm summer breeze in my ears |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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I hear your voice, my mind straining. Soft, distant and so pure with love. Your words caress me as I listen. I hear you, you fill my ears with joy. Can I not ever see the face behind? Does my memory only hold sounds? Given a chance, will you give me love? Embrace me with your tender voice. A calling Loon echoes your own call Doves in trees voice love as do you. Softly I hear those chosen words sent. Madly I scramble as my heart fills. Alexander Graham Bell saw you in dreams. Your vision created his creation for us. Without Bell, would I have ever known? Would our worldly paths have ever crossed? My dearest, if I cannot hear you, I will wither. The flower within me, no longer watered, dies. A soul filled with angelic sounds lies still. This heart beats weak as words are not heard. Each time you speak, I jump with true joy. Like a child after candy, I prance and dance. I live for each moment that your voices touches. I breath a breath that I might speak in return. Give me your voice that I might carry it. Share it that I may eternally enjoy. Whisper softly your most intimate thoughts. Shout to me the joy you have, and we share. In my dreams I will see you, I will hear you. I will cry joyful tears as my ears are touched. In my dreams I will hold you, ravish you. For your words spoken take me away. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
No one writes romance like you, Magnus. So vivid and descriptive. A sincere honesty echoes throughout each and every line. Lovely work!  All writing comes |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is beautiful Magnus! Wonderful phrasing throughout ... a lovely tribute to one whose voice takes you to the heavens and back. Much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) You are such a true romantic, sweet Magnus, your words are always sooooo beautiful! (sigh) God Bless You, she will always be so lucky to love you! (sigh) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Magnus - Whoosh!! This swept me away. Lovely. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
LW...thank you....coming from you, I consider that a definite compliment...Happy that you enjoy these. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Kit...some sounds are such pleasure to a person's ears...so captivating and real. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Noah...you write well yourself. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Chris....thanx much...just hope you come down to earth soon...enjoy. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmm lovely...another one to make my heart go pitter-patter from the King of Romance! Enjoyed, Nancy! Oh forgot the hug! ((hug)) ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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