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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers 
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Please Please tell me Let me know That you care for me Just one little touch A gentle caress down my back And I will wear the sweetest smile On my face, right there Else I do not know What to do Or how to act When I'm around you Tell me too If I mean nothing My heart will break My dreams come a-crashing Love is lost But life goes on My mind goes dead But I'd soon be re-born No matter what I must know Please tell me I love you so [This message has been edited by Mon Cherie (edited 11-07-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I hope this person tells you what you want to hear. Waiting for love to be shown is so hard to bear. Very well done.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I liked this, I’m a fan of short lines with lots of meaning, It’s good you are looking for actions As well as words to tell you, Because some people just are able to tell in words What their hearts feel. Gloom |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Mon, your beautiful heart always shines with such gorgeous love to give, and deserves the most sweetest beautiful love! (sigh) May he answer your call and fill your heart with joy! (smiles) I love you so very much, just as we all do, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) Soooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mon, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Startime:  *sigh* as suggested by my later pieces of poem, I didn't hear what I wanted most to know. In fact, I think I've lost him.Gloom: Thanks! I'm still trying to be one who can express millions with few words. I'm really trying hard. Mistletoe Angel: Thanks for the love, care and concern. But now I can only be  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes..many times those words we want to hear are not easily said by the other...its almost as if we have to beg for those words...and then they lose there value...James |
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