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A Bouquet
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A Bouquet |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Bouquet She is a gateway of surmise. Delicate flecks in hazel eyes. With lips and nose that softly bed Beneath a crown of grey and red. This mien, this Queen that I have wed. A thing of beauty and complete. A tender morsel candy sweet. My dream of unequivocal. My fantasy, my miracle. My mountains highest pinnacle. My Ptar of Egyptian light. My star that brights the dark of night. My faith in all that is my fife The silver chord that binds my life. This ageless beauty and my wife. To the powers that reign and let. I am forever in their debt. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 11-07-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 CLAPPING WILDLY!!! BRAVO!!! OH MY GOSH, THE PERFECT WEDDING DECLARATION OF ETERNAL LOVE!!! (smiles) This made me cry in joy, I love it!!! (big hugggssssss) Her heart will melt always when you read this to her! (smiles) BRAVO!!! Soooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes you just have to love those powers that be.... this is beautiful Sy, and a wonderful way to start my Wednesday... |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is by far the sweetest pledge of love that I've seen... I'm very glad that you've found the someone you want to share your life with. ^.^ |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
As you should be and what a lovely tribute to the Queen! I think this is fabulous  Well done, Seymour!-befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She is a gateway of surmise. Delicate flecks in hazel eyes. With lips and nose that softly bed Beneath a crown of grey and red. This mien, this Queen that I have wed. =================================== My Ptar of Egyptian light. My star that brights the dark of night. My faith in all that is my fife The silver chord that binds my life. This ageless beauty and my wife. To the powers that reign and let. I am forever in their debt. =================================== Sy-babes...this isnt a "bouquet" ... its the WHOLE FLORIST!!! Its Eden in Spring Its the tulip fields in Holland The Rose Garden in Heaven  my oh my... (OHHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS)!!!!!!!!! What a sweet intend.... and you know the internal rhyme makes me giddy. BEAUTIFUL Stinky... this one should get Randy out of the doghouse and get ya some extra chips and beer *L* Winkiewinkie*  meI can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'She is a gateway of surmise. Delicate flecks in hazel eyes. With lips and nose that softly bed Beneath a crown of grey and red.' You are remarkable ! To paint the woman you love with such a delicate palette of phrase ... is heart-art at it's finest~ *Hugs* my friend~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you and May love and light always shine upon you! Sunshine, That's true. *L* Mon Cherie, Me too and thank you. Lady, Thank you for the well done. *L* JM, But you are still my butterfly love. Winkiewinkie, Stinky |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You know you are right up there too. I have allot of loves. Hugs and kisses. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour, this is romantic and sweet! gave me a big warm smile |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"My dream of unequivocal. My fantasy, my miracle." "My faith in all that is my fife The silver chord that binds my life." Oh my, oh my, oh my ... big sighhhh! Seymour this is so incredibly beautiful. What an amazing tribute. Perfectly penned, and so delicately flowing ... loved this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...Tender time has filled your pen with love's ink, I think. This poem is a treasure! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A beautiful dedication. What two lucky people. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
What a wonderful poem, it flows from the tongue and heart as well. With perseverance even the snail reached the Ark. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, this is just sooo beautiful. Gave me the biggest smile today. Lucky lady to have this written for her. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
... wonderful... and your grasp adn use of vocabulary... a gift... Regards, my friend, sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Thank you sweet. *L* Kit, Wonderful comment, thank you sweet. *L* Martie, Beautiful comment, thank you. *L* RSWells, Thank you for the read and comment. Lucie, Beautiful responce, thank you Enchantress, Thank you for the hugs, *L* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Thank you my friend. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 11-07-2001).] |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
you know this is neat, this is the way I feel about my wife, we've been married 31 years. This is a great way to show your appreciation for her. Dennis |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dennis, Thank you and I've been married 59 yrs. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
STANDING OVATION!!!!!!!How can I even begin to tell you how magnificent a poem this is. I so love to read the words of men who love their wives so much. You both should be congradulated. Oh gosh.......you are both just wonderful. I love you both!!!!  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahhhh how beautiful she is! and so is your poem Seymour, a tender and romantic tribute. Maree |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime, Love offered is the highest tribute, thank you. *L* Maree, Thank you for the "and so is" LOL *L* |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I bow for you way down to the ground For spreading words of love around She must be a special lady I'm sure As you've described her in poetry so pure Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Titia, A gracious and beautiful comment. *L* |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Such supreme appreciation. A very passionate and endearing piece. A jewel in her crown! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rwood, A humble bow for now, *L* |
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