Open Poetry #16 |
Echoes On The Wind |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Echoes On The Wind ~*Marge Tindal*~ What is that sound ? That melodious sound ? I hear it circling circling around~ It sounds just like your laughter strumming back across the valley Echoing I love you - loooove yoooou - looove yooou in heart-strung memories lifted on guitar-string wings~ Taking me in spinning me grinning me winning my heart all over again~ ~ ... me too~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Marge---I hate it when you make me smile when I don't want to. lol I'm glad for your echos though I wish they hadn't resounded so loudly on this end. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Such wonderful lovely echoes... I'd love to hear them echoing across my valley..... Thank you sweet ~*Marge*~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Duncan~ That's the little Cherokee in me ... we sneak right up on you with those *smiles*~ MyEnchantedMelody~ I hope you do ... listen closely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, a good part of my family's heritage is Cherokee Indian too! (big hugggssssss) This is such a beautiful and romantic poem; the most beautiful feeling of love is feeling you're falling in love all over again every time you look into a lovers eyes! (smiles) Sooooooo romantic, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Absolutely lilting! A great way to begin my Wednesday.... so many treasures...so little time!... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Margie gal ... you get me smiling every time, you do - you do! I loved the flow in this wonderful piece, and the fading echos with the disappearing font was perfect! I just loved this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
so so nice... this woman's soul drowned in the shallow waters of a man's heart. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very very lovely and uplifting. Loved it for sure! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--Love makes beautiful feelings and poetry. Hugs for this one. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
As it should be ... won over and over again Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lovely sounds.......the echoes........beautiful Marge!! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Sweet Marge, your words are echoing right across the ocean dear. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah! Margemagic... regards, sudhir |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OH..SO thats where youve been??!!?? I was wondering where you had gotten off two... youre up in the CLOUDS Wonderful uplifting echos here me dear. When your happy...we're all happy love ya lady me I can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh I love it when your words echoe what I want to hear. BRAVO!!! I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
this feeling is a special one, needed it today. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Noah~ Thank you~ Karilea~ Thankee, gal~ Kit~ Awww, I'm just glad you liked it~ AWhispersCaress~ Thank you, hon~ Enchantress~ Really pleased to know you enjoyed it~ Martie~ *giggles* Yes, 'it' does~ InterLoper~ Thank you, sweet man~ GentleSpirit~ Thanks bunches~ Titia~ I smile just knowing that, my friend~ *Hugs* Sudhir~ Thank you gentle friend~ JanetMarie~ LOL .. riding out a 'different' hurricane ! ! StarTime~ Echoes come back in sweetest refrain~ Thank you~ LadyOfShallot~ So glad to share a needed thought~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Marge! No surprise in that! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ Very refreshing from you..... Lauren~ I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-07-2001).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I like like like like this....Love has so much energy here. Your words say it over and over...like an echo.... |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
nice lingering echos.... ~ cottage |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ I doubt I could open very many of my poems and not find your sweet comments on them~ You are the bestest~ GreenEyes~ Thank you, hon. It's always good to see you~ Magnus~ I thank you so very much~ Cottage~ It's really nice to know you enjoyed it~ Thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love to shout in canyons! This is great, a LOVE shout to echo all about. Can we all shout this in harmony together on Remembrance Day November 11???? (Thanks again to 'Loper for sending this poem back into my field of vision) |
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