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It Takes Two To make One
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It Takes Two To make One |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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It Takes Two To Make One The butterflies that fly the sky Can only fly the world so high. But the butterflies of our dreams Can go beyond the stars it seems. It’s those of which I speak today It’s those that fly’s our hearts away. It’s those that play within our scenes It’s those that fly within our dreams. There are two worlds that live within One is true and the other thin. Like magnets of opposite pole They make this creature and this soul. We can’t eliminate the one For if we do than we are done. We must have sad to make the glad For how else can we judge of had? I’ll say to all beware of pride For tide of time is all, our bride. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~  I love your math ... as I love you~  That's the sum of it ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your equations equal more than all the world has set in store do not divide this wisdom's chime as bells ring forth the tick of time... again, you inspire, but then, you always do! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice Seymour.... nice indeed! |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wisdom Seymour ~ written so wonderfully. Bonnie |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Where ever would we be Without the other half of we? Love it, dear Sy.. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Hey, I like this. It is so good. |
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NightShadow Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 127New Jersey |
This is a very wonderful poem.. I love it a lot!  A Life without Love, is no life at all... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
But the butterflies of our dreams Can go beyond the stars it seems. YES they can   It’s those of which I speak today It’s those that fly’s our hearts away. ===================================== There are two worlds that live within One is true and the other thin. Like magnets of opposite pole They make this creature and this soul. We can’t eliminate the one For if we do than we are done. We must have sad to make the glad For how else can we judge of had? ================================== I've said it before ... I'll say it again(many times) I do so love the way your poetic mind ponders and wanders(right across my heart) You do know how cool this poem is right? But then so is the poet who wrote it. As always we learn from your wisdom rhymes and your butterfly visions. *WW* me  Well tomorrow holds only mystery And who's to say what might be But in you I found a love so strong The sun and the moon looked on in jealousy [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 09-25-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all the wonderful poets above my sincerest thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poetry. With a special thanks to my wonderful Tinkerbell. Who makes the unbelievable look so easy. She is blessed special abilities and sensitivities far beyond her years. Bless you all. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is so lovely. But the butterflies of our dreams Can go beyond the stars it seems Dreams are such wonderful things to have. Such a beautiful write If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
We must have sad to make the glad For how else can we judge of had? This really spoke to me! I loved this poem, but more importantly you made a difference today in one person anyway. Thank you. ~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite, perfect, and oh sooo beautiful!!
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy: You write with wisdom ink, I think. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
There are two worlds that live within One is true and the other thin. Like magnets of opposite pole They make this creature and this soul. |
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