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Twisted Tryster
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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He loves to take you on twisted turn and tryst, makes you cry out for more till your eyes do burn... but then your tears come from happy flows, for Alan likes to tickle your toes and makes you smile with his beguile. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sounds like a versatile fellow, this Alan  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes, he must be a clever fellow, he's a pipster. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Alan does this? Yes...somehow I believe it! Good write Midnitesun! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Like the style. Hmmmmm. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Enchantress, yes, his poems sometimes do a little twisting. Daniel, Thanks for the comment. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a very apt description of him. A very versatile poet, and a talented one too. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
From what I've read so far this fits him.nice writing. Peaches |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
YAY! Thanks for the nice comments on this. AS I said before, some people are easier to sketch than others. Alan gave me the idea himself (inadvertently) in a reply to one of his poems. It's amazing how we all reveal ourselves even when we don't realize it... some expose more than others.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Such a beautiful tribute to our sweet Alan! He is a special loving friend and poet just like you! (big hugggsssss) I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hey, Noah. Aren't you next in line? That one may have to post in "The Other Forum" ....Hehe. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Midnitesun....I don't know what to say except thank you..you are way to kind |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You just said it Alan, with the Thank you. (And I'll post at the Meadows tomorrow AM.) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
the title caught my attention and the poem made me smile... "witty sweetness" this is.. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey how true he can mix love and passion on every turn with if sad and blue he shows concern Hope P.s always the sweet and caring |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
lovely....!! tickled my fancy! what a great tribute to Alan! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
faterider, thanks. Glad the title caught you Thnaks for looking at Alans' sketchHope, yes, he can do the tears thing and the other thing, both gently. doreen, good morning, thanks for stopping in to see Alan. I'm having an extra cafe for you today |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
delightfully written...  regards, sudhir |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sudhir, thank you for reading, and the delightful comment. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Midnite...they say that to be tickled, is torture...but in poetry, I'd say its fortunate. Enjoyed the poem! |
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