Open Poetry #16 |
. . . Left unsaid |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I have left unsaid the three most important words no more left unsaid I now tell you I love you now I must show that is true ~*~ Inspired by: With Age Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And a wonderful inspiration she is, Our Lady Santos... well done, sir! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I really love this new series of tributes. You are a first rate Man. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is great Interloper. Although some things are better left unsaid...when it comes to 'I love you' it is better to get it out sooner. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
yes, those are the most important words ever...say them as if it were the last time and pray it's not! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Good words to live by. But I wonder why when ever I say it, it seems to be the wrong situation,unwanted, unappreciated. Sigh Sandra |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I don't think those words should ever be left unsaid if it's what you truly feel. Nicely done, Interloper. All writing comes |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!A man who not only tells the words but show them as well. You are a treasure. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
.......*sigh*........ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
You were well inspired. Beautiful words and thoughts in both poems. Lovely. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful! Your heart shines with eternal love so heavenly! (big hugggsssss) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Through the sparkle mirrored in eyes... show her the world and soar together beyond Through the touch of gentle hand... show her adoration and the purity of love Through the embrace in arms of strength... show her comfort forever and a day INTERLOPER, me thinx you already know how much I like your poem but I'll say it here anyways.... it's a beautiful write SweetPoetfriend *~coco~* |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The only 3 words worth taking such an incredible risk for...well done. |
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