Open Poetry #16 |
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O Gentle Rose |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas ![]() |
I wish for time, for moments to breathe; these days pile up like bricks on my chest. There are many wonderful posts here that slip past my eye, people who write such beautiful words. If I even tried to name those that came to mind I would still forget someone, regret something. So to each, I've enjoyed what you've shared, treasured what you've bared and I hope my tide changes soon. Continue on, leave this delicious trail of breadcrumbs, I will catch up again. And now something for those of brown eyes and blue eyes and green eyes and two eyes... you know who you are. ![]() O Gentle Rose You once found, I should never lose. May you be lasting as the moon and stay precious as a rose. I admire your kind manners and the generous, honorable quality you so embody. Hear how your voice is soft, sweet and whisperish; it is an excellent thing. You are a woman special of any devotion. May you be mother to your children and lover to your companion with all the understanding life has given you. A fine lady like you is hard to hide for you radiate the essence of your very soul. May I hold on right to you as a gentle rose. - Jephrey [This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 09-25-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You once found, I should never lose. May you be lasting as the moon and stay precious as a rose. ================================= May I hold on right to you as a gentle rose. ================================== absolutely stunning........ poetry in motion. jm Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
........yes...........you may ![]() wow, this is such a tender write...... there are women all over the world now with melted hearts ![]() ![]() |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You say the days pile up like bricks on your chest, and yet the words that escape from your heart are like fragrant rosebuds. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Such a soft romantic soul you are, Topheth. This is so beautiful it takes my breath away. I will have to keep this one I think. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nothing for red eyes, except a lovely read.... very well done, Sir! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
So extemely beautiful. My green eyes fill with mist from such beauty, more beautiful than a rose. Hugs. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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