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She loves no more
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She loves no more |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Her shirt unbutton mini skirt on looking for love In lonely nights when the price is right she clings to love without emotion She stares blank at his face if he wants more love he has to pay Her fragile body consumed with lust Her long silky hair spell out desire Her luscious lips have taste too many Only her heart remains untouched No one can reach her she loves no more |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Walker..well done but sad write about a lady of the evening. Enjoyed! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* how extremely sad. I could feel the tears falling in her heart where even hope seemed to die. This poem touched my heart. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ah, Walker, a sad love tale. 'she clings to love without emotion' She's clinging to something anyway. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Walker, this is so so sad, my heart cries out to this dear woman and prays with all my heart her heart will be touched by love! (sad sigh) Sad but very well-written, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Sad write of someone who cannot know love. Giving it every day (of a sort), but never actually knowing it. What an unhappy life, to never know the most beautiful thing there is on this earth If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This person can only know love once they start being able to love themselves...So often they have been abused or hurt in such a way that they no longer love themselves. thus the inability to be loved or give love... A very sad experience for women who are human beings just like us....just being constantly exploited for what they have, not who they are. Well written...thank you for this reminder... |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
The tiredness of the streets...hope this woman finds some rest and renewal! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
A sad poem, but some hope at the ending. A good man would never ask a woman to stoop to this. This is a good write, Walker. Your writing is getting better all the time. Peace to you this chilly morning. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The price she paid is not worth it...James |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Oh....such a heartbreaking write showing so much of that lady... I echo Magnus words... She has to learn to love herself before her heart would love anyone... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Amazing what you can do with a hurricane day off. Impressive, walker. |
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