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walker
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0 posted 2001-11-05 08:02 PM



Her shirt unbutton
mini skirt on
looking for love
In lonely nights
when the price is right
she clings to love
without emotion
She stares blank
at his face
if he wants more love
he has to pay
Her fragile body
consumed with lust
Her long silky hair
spell out desire
Her luscious lips
have taste too many
Only her heart
remains untouched
No one can reach her
she loves no more

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-11-05 08:09 PM


Walker..well done but sad write about a lady of the evening.  Enjoyed!  ~hugs, Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Startime
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2 posted 2001-11-05 08:10 PM


*sigh* how extremely sad. I could feel the tears falling in her heart where even hope seemed to die. This poem touched my heart.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2001-11-05 08:15 PM


Ah, Walker, a sad love tale.

'she clings to love
without emotion'

She's clinging to something anyway.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2001-11-05 08:21 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Walker, this is so so sad, my heart cries out to this dear woman and prays with all my heart her heart will be touched by love! (sad sigh) Sad but very well-written, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tracey
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5 posted 2001-11-05 09:33 PM


Sad write of someone who cannot know love. Giving it every day (of a sort), but never actually knowing it. What an unhappy life, to never know the most beautiful thing there is on this earth

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Magnus
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6 posted 2001-11-05 09:53 PM


This person can only know love once they start
being able to love themselves...So often
they have been abused or hurt in such a way
that they no longer love themselves.  thus
the inability to be loved or give love...
A very sad experience for women who are
human beings just like us....just being
constantly exploited for what they have,
not who they are.  Well written...thank you
for this reminder...

Accordionmaid
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7 posted 2001-11-05 09:57 PM


The tiredness of the streets...hope this woman finds some rest and renewal!
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8 posted 2001-11-06 01:49 AM


A sad poem, but some hope at the ending.  A good man would never ask a woman to stoop to this.  This is a good write, Walker.  Your writing is getting better all the time.  Peace to you this chilly morning.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2001-11-06 03:29 AM


The price she paid is not worth it...James
MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
10 posted 2001-11-06 05:27 AM




Oh....such a heartbreaking write showing so much of that lady...

I echo Magnus words...
She has to learn to love herself before her heart would love anyone...

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Duncan
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11 posted 2001-11-06 01:33 PM


Amazing what you can do with a hurricane day off.  Impressive, walker.
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