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Open Poetry #16

Poetic Lacrimations

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-11-05 07:14 PM

Poetic Lacrimations

I weep, I weep,
for the one who
will come to me
in deepest sleep

I weep, I weep,
such tears of joy
that I may find
a love to keep

I weep, I weep,
from gentle heart
made soft for him
a love not cheap

I weep, I weep,
filled with pride
of words written,
make my heart leap

I weep, I weep,
but not with sadness
do my tears fall,
true love goes deep

I weep, I weep,
eyes light with love
my soul knows him,
love we may reap

I weep, I weep,
with hopefull joy
love filling me,
while I'm asleep

Karen Torbiak©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

1 posted 2001-11-05 07:17 PM

beautiful as always. good read star

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-11-05 07:18 PM

Lovely write. We should all be so lucky as to find a love so true and deep.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-11-05 07:30 PM

Need a hankie? Good write, Startime!

emily
Member

since 2000-10-03

Posts 142
USA

4 posted 2001-11-05 07:57 PM

I'm crying!

Emily

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-11-05 08:13 PM

Don't weep no more, love will come (and not while you're sleeping) Great expression of love

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2001-11-05 09:01 PM

This is very, very good. I like it.

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