Open Poetry #16 |
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The Stoker of Fires |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea ![]() |
The Stoker of Fires by Michael I beheld pain and found it evil. A stoker of the fires of hell with maddening laughter. A hand upon the brain, ever tightening its grip, clenching into fist, trying to steal sanity. A robber of life, a crippler of intellect and spirit. A hideous thing with foul mouth that spouted hate. I mutilated it before it could take my peace, before it could consume me. I lopped off its head, because I could no longer bear the stench of its maggot breath and taunting laughter. Michael Auguste~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, Michael, this is so dark for you. Are you ok? (((hugs))) me |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee Michael...this sure gives us food for thought! Good write and nice pic. Love those dimples! Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michael---good for you..a strong spirit talking here...and such a dimple deserves a hug! ((((hug)))) |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Quite a change from the romantic poetry I've come to know you by. I'm hoping all is well. Glad you nipped that devil pain in the butt. I have my own methods, sometimes they work, sometimes they don't. WARM HUGS to you today, and I'll keep you (painlessly) in my thoughts. Thanks for the photo! I have a dimple too, but it's starting to merge with a wrinkle ![]() |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Kick it once for me. Vivid! |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Good stuff, Michael, glad you have sent that pain where it belongs. AWAY! Sandra |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Powerful write, Michael. Wow. ![]() All writing comes |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Michael, Very dark.. I'm not used to seeing you like this. I hope all is well. And I must agree.. what dimples!!! ![]() ![]() Hugs, Tara Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Auguste even though it's a dark poem I sense freedom at its end. Freedom from something holding you back. And no matter how we express it this sense of regained self control it's always good for us.Thanks for this one. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It is SO insidious, isn't it? Creeps up on you and robs you...like a persistant pick-pocket... Hugs, dear one. I miss you. ![]() |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is pretty powerful stuff Michael. Well written, but seems to scream somehow. Sometimes we need to scream and let it all out. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~What very strong thoughts here. Intense wording. - And good for you! *Peace. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I'd say you are extremely victorious in both the write and the fight...I admire you for for many reasons in this. {Hugs} Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Michael, this one need to be 'bumped' so anyone who missed it can see your dimples, and give you the big hugs you're always giving us. ![]() ![]() |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow this one definately made me think! Thanks for the read! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
oh yes.......I love the spirit that flows from this as I read it! (and glad to 'see' you finally, dear friend!!!!!!) The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is a very passionate write...it is so easy to fall under the auspices of pain and suffering, and only the truly strong know when to fight the good fight... very well done... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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