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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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I often think about when we first met Things were so good back then you see Promises to me you seemed to forget And each day, you started hurting me I don’t know what I ever did so wrong For you to suddenly start turning on me I finally realized that I had to get strong In order to protect myself from thee My feelings you just didn’t seem to care Everything I wanted you always did forbid For me you never did have time to spare You always acted like I was just a kid After awhile, I learned not to even cry I became so numb deep down inside No more, did I even want to try And my feelings I just had to hide © By Sue 8/15/01 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ouch!!! Painful feelings indeed... all I can say is that there are people out there who won't treat you that way and you can never give in to the thoughts you don't deserve better... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmartChick~ Welcome to the posting side of Passions~  Quite an emotive piece. I'm sure if you live up to your ID name ... this type of treatment won't be a problem for you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Heartfelt feelings indeed. Welcome to you. Look forward to seeing more If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Welcome and a nice write! However, I have a saying, "if it hurts, don't do it!", and now I noticed you are a "smart chick"!  enjoyed!~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly |
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