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There's No Other Man
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There's No Other Man |
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Trina Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97 |
You're a man it doesn't take your broad shoulders or your muscular form to prove it. It doesn't take the size and shape of anything between your thighs, it's there, nothing can remove it. It's not your hairy legs or the scent of your skin that keeps me coming back I can read you like a book, a good one that's got me hooked. I adore you, though I assure you that it's not even because of your look. You're a man forget the outline of your lips or the color of your eyes I don't need no description for my heart never lies A man, a man in a world of many others who are better or worst than yourself. A man in a world full of liars,cheaters, haters, and lovers but in my world, in my heart there's noone else but this man. |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hey Trina!! Nice to meet you I'm Joanna. This poem is awesome, especially the first stanza! I'm sure that man thinks your just as special! : ) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Yes he is, and he is the man your beautiful heart is destined to love! (sigh) You describe his special love so well! I love it! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Trina Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97 |
Hey Joanna , thanx alot. I'm glad you liked it and I appreciate you taking time out to read my work, hope you find more of mine u like. I only wish this person felt this way about me, only thing is since I'm only a teenager the so called man would be a boy but even though I was thinking of him when I wrote it I think man fit better than boy,for this particular poem anyway. Well take care, Trina |
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Trina Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97 |
Awww thanx Noah, that's so sweet. I'll keep my hopes up , I don't know about the love part though. I'm a bit young to claim I'm in love. I just like him alot .  Take care, Trina |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* there is nothing like the crush of a young lady but you sure make yourself sound mature to me. Very well written.  you never know when he will look your way and think the same kind of thoughts.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Trina Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97 |
well thanx star, I'm glad I have the ability to make myself seem mature through my writing. Thanx for reading and for ur hopeful and encouraging words. Take care, Trina |
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