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Emotions |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers 
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Restless I pace around the empty room Aimless Thoughtless A blank mind and a troubled heart Frustrated Defeated Hands covering my face, I slid onto the floor Tired Emotions They rage in my head Messy Excited A new year, a fresh start Hopeful Useless With no goals, a blank future Desperation Happiness Gathering of family and friends Joy Warmth Love feels my heart Laughter Sadness To be apart from loved ones Reluctance Optimistic It will soon be over, I'll be back Glad Gloomy It seems like a long way Lonely [This message has been edited by Mon Cherie (edited 11-03-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!You took so many emotions and drew a perfect picture of each one. I love it. Very well done. I am just glad we don't have them all at once. Can you imagine the turmoil that would create in our heads.   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
to coin a rock song "it's in the way that you use it......" by Eric Clapton one of my all time favorites...and emotions? It's all in the way that you use them. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful expression here, Mon Cherie. The flow of emotions was remarkable! All writing comes |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Mon, this is so so sad but so so beautiful! (sigh) Soon you will be embraced by such sweet love and your loving heart will forever sing with happiness! (smiles) We all love you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Once again, Thanks for commenting on my work. I'm still trying, and as a friend once told me, write about your experience. And, well, I try to do it. Those emotions were a tough one to handle when they surfaced almost all at once. At the end, I couldn't even figure whether I should feel happy or hopeless. THank goodness, though... it doesn't happen all the time, else I'd be going bonkers soon.  |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
wow, I really like your poetry! I also like the lay out of this poem, it brings lots of pictures to my mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I went on that trip! got dizzy! |
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