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SEA

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with you

0 posted 2001-09-24 04:29 PM

Seasons turn to greet me with warm embrace
Autumn’s gentle breeze, light upon my face
A kiss of crispness to blush my cheeks pink
world offers golden hue, for thoughtful think

leaves fall in rhythmic dance of life renew
swirling flights of fancy, for joyous view
swept up in the magic, of nature’s song
I smile, skip and softly hum along

I have been waiting, for this time of year
I hold it in my soul, with great revere
In every day, I find such happiness
In awe of the land’s metamorphosis

It brings such bliss, that I cannot contain
To watch my sky cloud over, sharing rain

~SEA

Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-09-24 04:32 PM

When I learn to write like you, it will be like this...

Cpat Hair

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2 posted 2001-09-24 04:45 PM

very nicely done SEA... very nice imagery and a soft gentle feel to the whole... very enjoyable read!!

SEA

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with you

3 posted 2001-09-24 05:27 PM

thank you both so much

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-09-24 06:10 PM

SEA~

'leaves fall in rhythmic dance of life renew
swirling flights of fancy, for joyous view
swept up in the magic, of nature’s song
I smile, skip and softly hum along'

What lovely, lovely thoughts you share~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SEA

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with you

5 posted 2001-09-24 06:26 PM

thank you Marge, nice warm fuzzies now

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

6 posted 2001-09-24 07:05 PM

My favorite time of year. A wonderful picture......

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

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Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-09-24 07:37 PM

Susan~

You've mastered the sonnet form exceptionally well! And Autumn and Spring are my favourite times of the year - so, of course I love this! What a gorgeous view of Autumn you paint

You really should enter this in a contest~

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-09-24 07:41 PM

Sea...You know I love everything you write, but, with autumn upon us this just gently tugged at me to get outside and enjoy. Thank you. Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

BSC

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New York, USA

9 posted 2001-09-24 08:19 PM

How much more beautiful you have just made this season SEA ~ Simply wonderful. Bonnie

The Rusty Knight
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10 posted 2001-09-25 12:02 PM

Chrysalis..I had to look that one up SEA...it has been a few years since Biology class and I don't think I have had a chance to use it since *S* It fits perfectly with this lovely poem....you do know how to stretch a poor old Texas boys mind...

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Mysteria

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British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2001-09-25 01:38 AM

Ah Sea, how beautiful was this? I had to print it out and sit and read it aloud to fully appreciate it, in all its glory. You sure know how to Sea a Sonnet!

~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

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where the sky and horizon meet

12 posted 2001-09-25 02:37 AM

your enthusiasm is contagious. It is such a beautiful time of year! Lovely poem

Hugs,
~Krista

rosepetals25

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13 posted 2001-09-25 07:50 AM

SEA,

Oh how I love your writing! I could only wish to write this well. Beautiful! I just love this!

TaraB

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On A Journey To The Unknown

14 posted 2001-09-25 10:51 AM

Well written!

Auguste

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By the sea

15 posted 2001-09-25 01:35 PM

Susan,

Just lovely...this is also my favorite time of the year.

(((hugs)))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

16 posted 2001-09-26 01:30 PM

What a beautiful sonnet you do ... but, then, you already knew that didn't you

Irish Rose
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17 posted 2001-09-26 01:36 PM

it's my favorite time of the year too, in Indiana, it's beyond words!!!!

Kathleen

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

JamesMichael
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18 posted 2001-09-26 02:30 PM

Very nice Sea...James

RSWells
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19 posted 2001-09-26 03:16 PM

A season made gentle when viewed with eyes of awed innocence.

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