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Promises Under A Full Moon
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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~*~ Promises Under A Full Moon ~*~ ~*~ I am but a delicate droplet, swimming in a sea of endless love. Shimmering in truth, by the light of a full moon, I rise naked before you, with my soul exposed in this gentle breeze. As waves of passion wash over me, can you not hear my pleading cry. I am fragile, transparent, a kindred spirit needing to be awakened to love. Come closer my love please. Take my hand, hold it firmly. With it, I give myself to you. Be gentle with me, for I give you my heart. As this glowing orb above us witnesses my sworn pledge to you of my love, can you not promise me? My heart is not cold, as those you have held; it is as soft and warm as a tropical breeze. I want to give myself to you, and you, my love are ripe to receive. Take me, explore me, I beg you, feel, smell, and taste my very essence. Look carefully into my soul, honesty and warmth lies there. Feel it, explore it, experience it. There is nothing hidden, no secrets. Love me completely under this full moon, but only if you can promise me this ~ Love me, for who and what I am, or set me free to drown in my sorrow. ~*~ Art: Jim Warren ~ jimwarren.com Music: Monlight Sonata ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
WEll, well. well, What have we got here. You've opened the door to your being a little further so we may peek into the intimacy of you THank you for this beautiful, sensual and flowing poem Liz |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
ABSOLUTELY STUNNING. Sensually perfect. I love it. The graphic makes the whole package complete.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 10-31-2001).] |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
The ending is so, so, so so, very powerful....A true picture of poetic wonder. And the grapics compliment the piece rightly so. Since this night is a full moon.... it is magnetically appropiate. Written with inner passion.  Maggie ((~.~)) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You always write so well and this picture certainly enhances every word and every droplet of a syllable that you share. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Awesome, sensual and lovely. Sandra PS Happy Halloween! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sharon this is a lovely passionate write... and shows yet another side to your varied, creative talents... I have been catching up on some of the other posts youve shared...your muse is giving you many gifts... wonderful writes and as always your presentation enhances the poetic pleasures for the reader. Keep em coming Poetess  This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just lovely. Very passionate! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Women are like diamonds with many facets, and this is just one side of a woman that I am glad you all enjoyed, thank you. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Wowzeroonies! Passion has never been spoken and captured more beautifully than you have done in this! And, I must agree with Maggie...the last verse was simply incredible..."Love me completely under this full moon, but only if you can promise me this ~Love me, for who and what I am, or set me free to drown in my sorrow." Absolutely awesome, my friend! Hugs and much love to you, ~*~dawn~*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Love me completely under this full moon, but only if you can promise me this ~ Love me, for who and what I am, or set me free to drown in my sorrow. ~*~ Elegant and beautiful writing Sharon. Into the library this goes. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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AJ MacNeil Junior Member
since 2001-05-02
Posts 40 |
AH HAH !!!!!!!!!!! You've been into the Vegemite haven't you ! I told you it's something special ! *winks* ... Great poem Sharon, as always love from, Andy XO |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do believe I like your response as much as your poem pleased me.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well thank you all for reading this one, it was using metaphors to show how fluid love can be, like water running through your fingers. I really appreciate your time in reading it. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
This is indeed "...soft and warm as a tropical breeze." Very sensual and softly erotic...lovely! |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
Absolutally beautiful...**I applaud** Until...ali {alibaster} "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001 |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Janette and Alibaster ~ Hello! I am glad you enjoyed it, as it was fun to do. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Love me for who I am and what I am" You give us a wonderfully open glimpse within your beautiful soul, Mysteria, my friend.. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Did I tell you how beautiful this is!!! I thought I did...but it might be on the other one you originally posted...This is incredible! Truly a sensually feminine work of art! I'm saving of course! Sincerely, Regina [This message has been edited by rwood (edited 11-03-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Mysteria, the graphix and poem were stunningly beautiful, and Moonlight Sonata is one of my all time favorites. I love the way you blend the words, the sounds, and the art into one sensually delightful package. Trademark, Mysteria. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is exquisite, Sharon! Beautifully done! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Nan ~ Thank you my friend, you are welcome into my heart anytime  Regina ~ I am so glad you enjoyed it (pssst, you are now can get into adult hon) Midnitesun ~ How kind of you to notice the "package" and call it a trademark, now that makes me feel wonderful Denise ~ What a lovely thing to say, thank you. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) OH MY GOSH, THIS IS SO BREATHTAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL!!! (sigh) There's nothing more beautiful in love than the special secrets and beauty within lovers explore! (kiss on cheek) Soooooo beautiful and passionate this sweet poem is! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
There is nothing hidden, no secrets. Love me completely under this full moon, but only if you can promise me this ~ Love me, for who and what I am, or set me free to drown in my sorrow. I love the graphics and the poem. It is set in a perfect dream world with such promises to come with only promise to make and keep. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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