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Ousiders Cattermole Junior Member
since 2001-11-02
Posts 27 |
In the quaintest little village This alone heart ever knew, Behind the snow covered hills I met one as beautiful as you. And there to falling in love We spent the years in wonder, How it was you came to die I sit alone to ponder. But even though the tears billow The snow still falls in rue, In autumn I watch the tulips willow While i sit to thoughts of you. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* my heart goes out to you in your deep sadness and loss of the one you love so dearly. This poem touched my heart. Welcome to Passions. I know you will love it here..the poets here are the most loving and compassionate of people anywhere.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Wonderful First Post!! Look forward to seeing more from you! ~Nancy Lee~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
In autumn I watch the tulips willow While i sit to thoughts of you. one little word "to" in place of "of" can make such a difference in a poem. no cliches' here. absolutely beautifully sad. welcome...... Look into the eyes of a man and |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
ohmeohmy!!! this is so sad......... so prolific........ so real...... i really love this one!!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome. This is a good first post, and you will find many here will share your thoughts. "In autumn I watch the tulips willow While i sit to thoughts of you." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions - lovely first post. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Nicely done with smooth flow. Wonderful first post! Welcome to Passions!! All writing comes |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I certainly look forward to reading more from you. This is wonderful. Please check your email for a special welcome!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! I look forward to reading more! |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Welcome! ^.^ This is a very nicely written poem, but it is very sad.... Looking forward to more! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A very touching and well said poem of loss. I hope that you have not experienced these feelings. They can last a lifetime. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Very well written, life is poetry and poetry is life..the sad and the happy times. Keep writing hope to see more of your poems. |
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