Open Poetry #16 |
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For Regina . . . challenge response #16 . . . Sweet Tennesse gal |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
If this offends any reader, please have the courtesy to POST YOUR COMMENT and send me an Email. I AM capable of editing almost anything. sweet Tennessee gal mountain born an’ bred she is with thirteen brothers ~*~ we met at the falls that feed the old fishin’ hole down in the holler ~*~ split rail fences thar to set on an’ talk and dream ‘til the brothers come ~*~ very protective very many an’ big, too we must avoid them ~*~ we found this nice place at the end of the holler whar the bluegrass grows ~*~ I stole me a kiss one thing led to another an’ we were kissin’ ~*~ we were explorin’ air breath comin’ in short gasps between air kisses ~*~ air hands so busy we were lost in each other here came her brothers ~*~ well, she got buttoned so did I as fast as fire an’ lit outta thar Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
didn't offend me, makes you seem all the more taller with every post! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Absolutely loved this!! Regina will love it too. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
niiiiiiiiiiice....I like,I like ![]() |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lady of Shallot~ Gosh. D'ya think I could get taller? I am the runt of the family at only 6'4" Gentle Spirit ~ Thank you ... and I hope she does ![]() SEA ~ Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnx ![]() Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
hehehe ![]() Hugs, ~Krista ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Interloper...this was very very tame...lol. Enjoyed this one as I have the others tall dude! Carry on..... ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
LOL *giggling* Oh gosh....I just can't seem to get enough of these..."Feet do you duty, your body's in danger" a favorite saying of my father and here it fits perfectly. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh no! You sure do have alot of bad luck. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Is your luck all bad? These are too clever! |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Krista ~ I think Larry told on us. I'll fix his wagon! enchantress ~ OK, I can live with tame ![]() Startime ~ Your daddy was a wise man ![]() SmartChick ~ If it weren't for bad luck I'd have no luck at all ![]() Deca ~ Well, if I'm so clever how come I don't get to finish. Heck, I really don't even get started good. I could blame lunatic and Sunshine for the blue moon. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Whoowwweeee!!! I reckon I got news for you...I been waitin on this muddy bank for 2 years for you to come round...Now I got me a Man!!!! Brother or no brother...I can whip em' and I have legs as long as two counties and you ain't goin no where!...But I'll play along...for the fun of it! ![]() ![]() Sincerely, Regina |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, this is making my day...once again. Regina ain't gonna let no durn bros stop her, oh no. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I think that by now you have a price tag, 13 brothers. What's next jealous boyfriend?? Too funny. |
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