Open Poetry #16 |
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Full Moon Sounds |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Full Moon Sounds beneath full moon where silence sounds amid the float of leaving ground where all your doubts convene the night reveal your fears in leave of write... begin the tell of time swift here as now all lines of rhyme come near through all voids one voice shall be heard gather ‘round for the whispered word shadows parlay events of eve inspiration comes though aggrieved transformation begins anew treasured words shall stir then this brew quiet strands of yesterday’s weave braiding now all the strands we leave in the wake of the where we’ve been standing alone in dim of glen beneath full moon where silence sounds begins the tell of time swift here shadows parlay events of eve quiet strands of yesterday’s weave Thanks for the inspiration, Sy! |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
I love the flow in this piece! Wonderful! Poetry is an expression of feelings. I do not write poems, but rather, the poems use me to write themselves. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I watched the full harvest moon rise high into the sky and enjoyed the respite from thinking. *S* But I'm sure glad you were inspired... this is poetic perfection, Sunshine... and so very, very beautiful!! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, so many perfect lines, I can't pick one or two, I love them all!!! ![]() |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was a very good read!!!!!!!!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Beautiful, sweet lady and you welcome. *L* |
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