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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-11-02 07:58 AM

Blue Moon II

~*~

phases bring you round
brighter to fling shadow's gown
round my feet this night

~*~

before all full view
nothing hides from sight of you
robbers curse this night

~*~

only spirits free
guiltless they stand before you
bathed in whitest light

~*~

day shall send you sleep
but your fullness I shall keep
close within my breast

~*~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2001-11-02 08:03 AM

only spirits free
guiltless they stand before you
bathed in whitest light

Karilea, this is stunning. Spirits should always be free!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

2 posted 2001-11-02 08:31 AM

You captured the feel of the moonglow *S*

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-11-02 08:37 AM

Ahh, Sis, you make more sense in words of few than I do in stanza after stanza...very gentle smile

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2001-11-02 08:47 AM

Beautiful Haiku's Sunshine

I enjoyed.

Maree

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-11-02 12:13 PM

Beautiful ...

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-11-02 02:04 PM

Beautiful Moon Magic.
Sandra

lunatic
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 172

7 posted 2001-11-02 02:48 PM

so melancholy
I saw you standing alone
bathed in my moonglow
~*~
keep me close inside
such a gentle resting place
moonglow will warm you

Let thy moon arise. William Blake

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

8 posted 2001-11-02 02:52 PM

some lovely images here

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2001-11-02 04:41 PM

I am one who loves the moon so this beautiful poem rates up among the best with me and is a keeper. BRAVO!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

10 posted 2001-11-02 08:01 PM

ahhhhhh yes!!!!! the moon a satellite of our souls, shining whole our hearts.....

beautifully penned, sweet friend

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