Open Poetry #16 |
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Possibilities |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone ![]() |
Oh miracle of God above I've found a little slice of love A voice of past returned to me the outcome, somewhat left to see. I reached and he reached in return our love not gone, though much to learn this one more time I'll try to give and show us both why we still live. A magic man told me today an owls nature is my way with hummingbird another part and he, the eagle of my heart. Predicted resolution true and happiness that may shine through so I am taking heart in hand to offer once more to this man. And should he crush it yet again I'll know enough to let it end. But maybe magic becomes real then worth past pain, to truly feel. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I believe there is a reason why friends and lovers come around and sometimes it is not over exactly when we think it is...we just have to make sure our expectations are in the right place...James |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Lovely poem and hope your dreams come true! Betty Lou Hebert |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
If love's embrace you finally find, Bear this warning still in mind For that which once was lost then found That one time ran you into the ground Can carry you to lofty heights, But drop you when its not so right. Protect your heart, oh poetess, So that I told you so don't redress And keep your heart now safe and sound Until true love is finally found. Best of Luck on love regained, hope it works out better than the last time. Very nice read. |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lovely... hope you find the love you are looking for... |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
here's hoping Sandra. . . wonderfully done. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks for all the support, everyone.. I need all the positive thoughts just to get on a plane.. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I do hope this time around all will go well for you and he. Lovely poem! To the top...it goes, as if by magic! Poof! Nancy. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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songstress51 Junior Member
since 2001-09-15
Posts 17Anytown, USA |
my wish is that you find love tenfold your expectations... |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I hope returning works for you, it never has for me, I've poked around Love's residue, and could no ember see. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Lovely poem. My fingers are crossed that all will work out. Good luck If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Plane ? You don't need a plane ! Sounds to me like you're flying high enough to just spread your wings and take off~ ![]() Best to you, gal~ Go for it ... ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Go for it girl! ![]() Best of luck to you....and hugs ![]() ~Krista ![]() |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Oh it's tricky I know that for sure. Nice write. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Sandra! This shows that we can find our hearts and inspiration again ... thank you for this positive and uplifting read this morning, much enjoyed! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Just be your self, and be true to yourself and I hope all falls into beautiful place! Very elegantly written Sandra! Best wishes! Sincerely, Regina |
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