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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-11-01 11:47 PM

Once in a...Blue Moon

The moon
in full body
reached out, arms embracing,
warming me in shadows of blue
tonight.

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2001-11-01 11:51 PM

Maureen,
I think I saw that moon! Nice touch.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-11-01 11:54 PM

'twas beautiful, Larry, and last night's was firey orange, perfect for Halloween.

*s thank you
Maureen

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2001-11-02 08:29 AM

This is good. I like it.

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-11-02 09:30 AM

Lovely, those full moons are so special.
Sandra

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-11-02 09:33 AM

Maureen,
The moon a mirror of the sun
Well done. *L*

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2001-11-02 10:09 AM

Oh...I love it. How did you make the vision so perfect with so few words?

BRAVO!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

7 posted 2001-11-02 02:58 PM

good to see you writing again

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2001-11-02 03:01 PM

How wonderful it is to read this from you

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2001-11-02 03:11 PM

~The moon in full body~

mmmmm that is a pretty picture!

Looking good Wynter!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2001-11-03 10:05 AM

It was really a strange sky, the moon was background by a ghostlike body with tendrils stretching out as if they were arms...I wish I had my camera then.. thank you everyone

Maureen

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

11 posted 2001-11-03 10:41 AM

Maureen, A wonderful cinquain!! I do love to do those. Thank you for sharing that one.

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

12 posted 2001-11-03 10:58 AM

excellent feel to this!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

13 posted 2001-11-03 06:18 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful! (sigh) May sweet love always fill your heart, sweet Wynter! (smiles) So much gorgeous beauty expressed in so few words! I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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