Open Poetry #16 |
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Letter #3 (For My Love) |
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LoveLetters Junior Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 35State of Hope |
i realize, as I write i these poems that my wanderings are cliche ridden, but they are on the direct path from my heart. That said, I think its fair enough to let them out for the sake of writing honestly. Enjoy or disapprove. Either way I hope it touches. How could I need you with desperation unequaled? You tried my heart more than once As I enjoyed the enticement of your arms. Tonight the rain seeks my soul And all for the pleasure of joyful tears. My body shakes and quivers With the burden of missing you And just knowing your lips whisper Creates my smile and dreams of peace. This distance is getting harder to bear, my love And I may tire of writing these cliches But I will never tire of feeling them. You have introduced a new music into my world. I have known the notes of many new songs But yours is as different As all of them were. I believe I have found a favorite. I long for you now as I am sighing these words. I live for you it seems For you are Love. Thank you for setting up residence in my hopeless heart. Love has many masks. I am but one of them. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* a beautiful and heartfelt love letter. It touched my heart. BRAVO!!! ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I think your exploration isn't fluff at all! |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the heart is not a cliche. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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