Untitled & Unfinished ( Written To The Beat Of An Instrumental)

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Open Poetry #16

Untitled & Unfinished ( Written To The Beat Of An Instrumental)

GhostWriter_6
Member

since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

0 posted 2001-11-01 06:08 PM

Im back to ground zero,
ive lost everything from "A" to Zinc,
as quick as you got to the top... your back at the bottom as quick as a blink.
waking up everyday looking for an alternaive deal...
no such luck.....
im stuck in the quick sand and my time is about up.
abrupt was the stoppage of the positive ground gained....
now plummeting like the Down jones of the stock exchange... points being deducted for mistakes ive made. not in need of a lecture abotu where i took the wrong turn,
You live and you learn....
your outcome.. 2 choices..
you Either get a set of Wings or you burn.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-11-01 06:13 PM

I know this feeling....

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2001-11-01 07:06 PM

I love your work because you always speak the truth and do it in such a creative way.
Your right, we live and we learn, sometimes we have to learn the hard way. well said baby

GhostWriter_6
Member

since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

3 posted 2001-11-02 03:30 AM

glad u like the poem.... i wasnt sure where i was going with this one when i wrote it... i just sat down with a pen and strted to write whatever came to mind...

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