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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-11-01 03:03 PM




Florida is nice
Walker is even nicer
I can assure you
~*~
she is so polite
her love is tender and true
the perfect lady
~*~
she has quite a pet
a ten foot alligator
acts like a puppy
~*~
have you ever tried
kissing with one eye open
it is not easy
~*~
I made excuses
To get my feet off the floor
She wasn’t buying
~*~
she brought the ‘gator
she brought it to the picnic
I thought about shoes
~*~
ah what might have been
I am not a ‘gator guy
And never will be

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-11-01 03:09 PM



Walker is sure to have a great time reading this....while she walks her 'gator...

this is precious!

doreen peri
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2 posted 2001-11-01 03:14 PM


you walk-her through some special thoughts....

nicely done!  

Duncan
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3 posted 2001-11-01 03:30 PM


She is a dream but you're right about that gator, she tried to convince me it was a chihuhua with gland problems.  
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-11-01 03:41 PM


LOL...still laughing at Duncan's reply!!
Keep at it Interloper...another good one, dude!

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Jenn Cirrincione
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5 posted 2001-11-01 03:49 PM


Gators are scary as all heck. Snakes too. Darn Florida!! I've been here too long...hehe

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

SmartChick
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6 posted 2001-11-01 04:15 PM


Oh no, an alligator! I think I'll stick with my dogs.
The Lady of Shallot
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7 posted 2001-11-01 04:38 PM


  

As long as this gator packs the picnic, he's ok!!!!!   Well done!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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just out of reach
8 posted 2001-11-01 04:44 PM


Interloper - sounds like you needed some "gator aid...lol...get it....gatorade?" oh well, this is funny !! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

walker
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9 posted 2001-11-01 05:45 PM


Well, I was not aware that I was part of the picnic girls, I'm honored. Thank you Interloper for your wonderful poem.We could have made at least an alligator something.
                                  


Startime
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10 posted 2001-11-01 07:09 PM


*giggling* Just better watch out for the sharp teeth on that gator.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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11 posted 2001-11-01 08:17 PM


good idea... keep walkin Tall Texan....
Tracey
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12 posted 2001-11-01 08:21 PM


oh, this is cute. This challenge is agreeing with you interloper.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SmittenKitten
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13 posted 2001-11-02 03:43 PM



Hehe, how'd I miss this one?
I'm thinking Walker brought her gator for a reason   We all know what you're up to sir!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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