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The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

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Texas

0 posted 2001-11-01 11:06 AM

               Sea and Sky

        In the darkness they are one
     Two bodies joined in vapor and mist
Forging bonds, holding each other in a tight embrace
    But in the morning light they separate
       Each giving the other space
        With only a gentle touch
           On the far horizon

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-11-01 11:14 AM

Yes!

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

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Canada

2 posted 2001-11-01 11:16 AM

STUNNING

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-11-01 11:35 AM

Fabulous!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

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with you

4 posted 2001-11-01 11:56 AM

mmmmmm this is so yummy!

I love it!!

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

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Perth Western Australia

5 posted 2001-11-01 12:01 PM

beautifully expressed !!
Hope
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Midnitesun

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Gaia

6 posted 2001-11-01 12:22 PM

Picture perfect poetry!

DawnG

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United States

7 posted 2001-11-01 12:47 PM

absolutely beautiful

Dawn

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

8 posted 2001-11-01 02:02 PM

Thank all of you for the comments. I am not sure what brought the thought of this one and the different meanings it takes. Sometimes the words bring the feelings rather than the feelings bring the words.

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-11-01 02:34 PM

I like the mystery within a relationship where you are connected yet two separate independent identities...James

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

10 posted 2001-11-01 02:40 PM

Dan, very nice! Enjoyed this and the pic. Nancy Lee *S*

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

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just out of reach

11 posted 2001-11-01 02:44 PM

Rusty Knight, oooooooh, I got a little rush when I read this. Very nice. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

12 posted 2001-11-01 03:26 PM

Thanks James,  I liked the feeling of that too.  The first draft of the poem hinted at that and I changed a couple of words to make it come out stronger.

Thanks *S* Nancy Lee *S*  I just got a digital camera and have fell in love with it.  I love to take pictures of sunsets and butterflies.  It is great to be able to see a picture as you take it.

Thank you NightShade,  It is always nice to be able to give a lady a rush *S*  Even if it is a little one.  he blushes

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Martie

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California

13 posted 2001-11-01 05:08 PM

Rusty--Just beautiful!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

14 posted 2001-11-01 05:44 PM

Dan, I  enjoyed your lines:

    But in the morning light they separate
       Each giving the other space
        With only a gentle touch

It's brings to me a special thought of giving each other enough space but still allowing the touching of emotions

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

chasing rain
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since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

15 posted 2001-11-01 06:43 PM

Beautiful thought. The connection, the images...amazing. Incredible.

++ Leah ++

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

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By the Seaside

16 posted 2001-11-02 12:55 PM

The sea is a lovely place to be where the sky and the horizon meet.

The space in between is never that far away.

I love the soft strokes you brushed up against. Very nice indeed

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

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Sydney, Australia

17 posted 2001-11-02 02:27 AM

WOW!!!!!!! this is Gorgeous!!!

Roniece

Dark Angel
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18 posted 2001-11-02 07:57 AM

With only a gentle touch
On the far horizon

Just beautiful!

Maree

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Gentle Spirit
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19 posted 2001-11-02 07:58 AM

Yep, this is just beautiful!! Wonderous write, wonderful picture. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 11-02-2001).]

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

20 posted 2001-11-02 11:23 AM

Nicely painted poetry. And a beautiful pic to go with.
Sandra

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03

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USA

21 posted 2001-11-02 11:51 AM

lovely, both words and pic

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Glenn Logan
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since 2001-10-10

Posts 111
Virginia

22 posted 2001-11-02 12:22 PM

Beautiful poem, and a very impressive photo to go with it!

Best wishes,

Glenn Logan

Accordionmaid
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since 2001-10-28

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MA/USA

23 posted 2001-11-02 01:33 PM

Mmmm...okay, I'll go there!

Moon Dust

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Skelmersdale, UK

24 posted 2001-11-02 01:42 PM

perfect

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.

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