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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
This is not a world you want to enter too many ghosts still walk through doors uninvited steal my blanket leave me shivering this is not a world you want to enter please take me literally |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Do you speak the truth? Or is this in the spirit of Halloween? =P |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How appropriate, ghosts on halloween, tell her to give back that blanket!!..need a good excorcist? (just trying to make you smile a little... I know, not easy right now). Seriously though, there are always shadows of ghosts in our lives and they do show up at the most inopportune moments, don't they? That's when we need our friends to lend their shoulders for support and understanding. I know where there's a pair of shoulders going spare if you want to borrow them  If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Duncan- is a cold world out there, but we need to keep that electric blanket no matter what. We make our own choices, regarding how "cold" we are willing to get. Yet love hurts so good.  Great poem. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
OOPs should I tread carefully here? Backing out while tossing you another blanket. Wonderful poem.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-01-2001).] |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
steal my blanket leave me shivering Sounds like you know the trials of being married. Touch you freezing feet to a warm backside. It gets the blanket back every time*S* Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Go on, invite me I shall enter unafraid your past will not scare me, only mine does... I love the "ponder" of this poem... *smiles* ~Tier |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
the greater the risk, the more inticing the ploy... very good. Look into the eyes of a man and |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You mean I don't have a ghost of a chance? Drats! OK, Duncan. Halloween is over, time for the ghosts to back off, it's almost time for Thankful Day. And who knows? maybe Santa will bring you a special present this year, to start New Year's off with fresh smiles. (Is this sounding disgustingly cheerful, when maybe all you want is to wrap yourself in a warm blankie?) Here is a warm hug. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Just popped my head in the door to see if you're okay. I had to open the door, not walk through it. Gee...smile Duncan...got me scared..I don't like ghost stories. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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LoveLetters Junior Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 35State of Hope |
I understand the feeling of uninvited ghosts. I really enjoyed this poem. Love has many masks. I am but one of them. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
even though Halloween is over, this gave me chills...where's my blankie? -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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