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Dance Upon The Breeze
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Dance Upon The Breeze |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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A faint vibration stirs above the ground sweeps silently through the valleys rustling through the leaves. Ricochets off the mountains swirls in the crevices bending over backwards blows between the trees. Ripples lapping on the shore cascading down the river whispers in wind a dance upon the breeze. Swept up in a gust like the moment that we seize. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (edited 11-01-2001).] |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
This is a good write...thank you! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSerenade~ Welcome to Passions~ A very pretty, imagery-laden piece~ I enjoyed the read~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!This poem sings with a music that comes from the breeze you have written of. I love it.   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
I love the rhythem and flow of this one. I look foward to seeing more. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Welcome to passions. wonderful entrance. Look into the eyes of a man and |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This makes me think of the times when the trade winds are really kicking it around here...say about 25 mph...and your can hear the sound of the palm fronds blowing in the wind and it just stirs me up...James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I should be thanking you Decaflame, I'm glad you enjoyed. Thank you for the welcome Marge. I tend to go heavy on the imagery. I really like those little clapping guys in your reply, they made me smile. Thank you Startime. I am truly enjoying my stay here at passions. Thanks for your nice reply Rusty Knight. I'm glad you like my 'entrance', something about the way you said that, ...just sashayin' into the room! Thank you for reading Whisper's Caress. Hi James, I lived on Maui for 10 years, and yes I know the sound of the palm trees swaying, it is like music to our ears isn't it? Can't help but stir us up a little bit. Thank you. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I try to seize the moment, too When serenaded in the blue, Whispers rippling in my mind I search the Passions, to "comfort find." Welcome again. *s ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I believe the moment is meant to be seized, I certainly wouldn't want to waste it! Thank you for your poetic reply Wynter. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is well done...your words are visually stimulating.  |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Welcome, great expression. |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
What's not to love about a breeze? *wink* Willie B |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you Poet deVine, I appreciate what you said and for taking the time to read. All of you have been so nice in welcoming me, I'm just so happy to be here. Thanks walker. I get your drift, yea the breeze is nice as long as it doesn't pick up speed. I'm not too fond of the wind. thank you very much for reading! |
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