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Passions Cold Shower |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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rwood's Water Log By Larry Chadwick She pushes her pen with utter disregard, Of what her words will do to my mind. Racing for the cold water of the shower, Making it hard for me my dignity to find. After all, what is an honorable man to do? Sensuality is a thing that is in your brain. If you don’t stop it before it all starts, Your marriage could go down the drain. So every time I see her post another poem, I approach it with trembling and fear. In advance I clear a path cause I know, That another sprint is surely very near. She tells me I’ll just have to get used to it, Becaused it is water logged I’ll always be. I don’t understand why she taunts me so, That rwood has absolutely no mercy for me. [This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 10-31-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* I love it. I know all about cold showers. *giggling* this is delightful.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Startime, Thanks. Nice to know I'm not the only one!  |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Racing for the cold water of the shower, Making it hard for me my dignity to find. Dignity, so that's what they're calling it now are they??? lol Cute write Larry. She's gonna get a kick out of this one!!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee Larry....you are going to have all the other female writers feeling left out. Or perhaps after reading me you feel more like a warm bath and hot chocolate. LOL....Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Ruthless it is, but I am more concerned with the ruin of my spirit because ultimately that is where I live. So we take more showers, it's so cool.... like your poem.  Now where did I leave my towel... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
she has no mercy on any of us!! My water bill's doubled!!  My rubber duck is asking for overtime!  We should form a union!!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now what was it you couldn't find in the shower? LOL. Someone has you all hot and bothered? Now that's really spooky!  |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Hehehe  I can't wait to see what Regina has to say! You are a bad one Larry  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Tracey, I should have put a string on it! Enchantress, I'm thinkin' the Interloper fell for that line. So forgive me if I proceed cautiously. BluesSerenade, Welcome to the blue pages. And forget about the towel! Balladeer, But on the bright side, our gas bill is down on the water heater! LOL Midnitesun, Hey, I'm thinkin' I resent that remark. On the other hand, it is halloween. SmittenKitten, I'm just hopin' for a response. But geesh am I ever water logged!  |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
She is a talented writer, that she is, so just pay up the water bill, fellows...and enjoy! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
To make it easier on you....leave your shoes off and the water on! You clean rascal you! There's always plenty of cold water..or you could just ice pack before you read! I got another for you coming up...so just print and read in the tub! Loved it dearly!!!! LOL!!!Sincerely, Regina |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh my gosh, I know all about the kind of passion that rests iny our head, and I find myself taking cold showers every time the sensuality is unbearable! (sigh) A very clever and crafty poem, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Decaflame, Actually, all things considered, the water bill in trade is a pretty good bargain! Regina, Thanks! I'm relieved you consider me clean. Noah, I'm sure it's a problem we're willing to live with. |
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