Open Poetry #16 |
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One Love |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA ![]() |
Two souls entwined, melded as one Beneath the hood of setting sun As darkness falls, our hearts alight With the coming of the night. You are my muse, my beautiful love Sent to me from up above. Angelic vision of God's own grace Beautiful body, mind and face. I am your Knight, your quested one Seeking your love, second to none. Together we are a perfect pair None could even dare to compare. We stand alone, and up above Others who are merely in love. Bear me, lover, into your arms Hold me close in your loving charms. Keep me ever close to thee As I will keep you close to me. With Love, Your Knight Knight of the Rose. |
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NightShadow Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 127New Jersey |
I almost don't know what to say ![]() ![]() A Life without Love, is no life at all... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh how beautiful....a Knight to his Muse, with such love and conviction. Enjoyed with a sigh!! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
I am your Knight, your quested one Seeking your love, second to none. Together we are a perfect pair None could even dare to compare. We stand alone, and up above Others who are merely in love. Bear me, lover, into your arms Hold me close in your loving charms. Keep me ever close to thee As I will keep you close to me. ========================= Wow....just sooooo romantically beautiful. You have gently touched my heart with this....and made it sigh.... ![]() Thank you ******************************* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSEvans, Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
oh my! This is B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L! ![]() Wonderfully expressed! Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Sinister Handed Member
since 2001-08-05
Posts 58 |
Very nicely done. True love is an amazing thing. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Awww...another beautiful love poem by you that makes my heart sigh ![]() Hugs, ~Krista ![]() |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... an enjoyable romantic read... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
oh, I like this. Very well written. Enjoyed reading it. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lovely! |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Night Shadow: What can I say...you inspire me Enchantress, MEM, Seymour, SH: thanks Krista: a fan? CH, SC Thanks Sunshine: Glad you liked it. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
This is cool. Keep writing yuh. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh I am so glad I came back to read today! This is lovely. Well done. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Rob, so romantic, so beautiful. You really touched my heart with this, I loved it. Your muse is a lucky girl to have this written for her. I want a knight to write for me now ![]() Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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