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Amber Dawn
Junior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 22
Minnesota

0 posted 2001-10-31 01:27 PM

A desert of space
hot and still with emotions held tightly
lay in wait
between us
and I can feel it in every glance that falls
just a little too fast
as we tread carefully in the quiet center
of a storm that could easily
destroy all

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2001-10-31 01:30 PM

ONLY thing wrong with this is I just didn't want it to end yet!

Very well phrased AD.

jwesley

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-10-31 01:31 PM

Welcome to Passions! I for one, am going to look forward to more treasures from you!

Please, check your E-mail for a special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

3 posted 2001-10-31 01:33 PM

Hi Amber Dawn,

You have a pretty name as my name is Dawn also.

This is a great first post.

Let me be the second to welcome you to Passions. I hope you will enjoy being here with us as much as we will enjoy having you. Please check your e mail for a special greeting.

Dawn

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-10-31 02:33 PM

AmberDawn~
Welcome to the circle of poetic friendship~
Enjoyed your thoughts~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Amber Dawn
Junior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 22
Minnesota

5 posted 2001-10-31 03:27 PM

Thank you so much, everyone, for such a warm welcome.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-10-31 03:35 PM

WONDERFUL FIRST POST !!
We'll be looking for more from you, Amber!
~NancyLee~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2001-10-31 03:35 PM

Amber Dawn, Welcome to Passions

loved your first post. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

8 posted 2001-10-31 04:20 PM

WOW!!!Welcome to Passions..you will love it here. Everyone is so loving and friendly. This is a jewel of a poem to start with. Magnificent. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

9 posted 2001-10-31 04:45 PM

Well stated, Amber....some moments are easily destroyed indeed....

Welcome to Passions!

God bless America, my home sweet home.

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

10 posted 2001-10-31 06:34 PM

Amber Dawn,

Wonderful first post

I love the wording... I can't wait to see more

Welcome to Passions... I'm sure you'll like it here.

Tara

Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2001-10-31 06:37 PM

Amber Dawn-
   Wonderfully penned thoughts for sure.
   Enjoyed this.
   Welcome to the Passions family!
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

12 posted 2001-10-31 06:48 PM

So very true indeed. Nicely written.

Welcome to Passions!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

13 posted 2001-10-31 11:53 PM

Welcome, and this is an excellent first post, I especially like this:

"and I can feel it in every glance that falls
just a little too fast"

Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

14 posted 2001-11-01 12:47 PM

I welcome you as well, and hope to have the chance to read more of your poems. Stick around.. this place inspires the best in us all.

With perseverance even the snail reached the Ark.

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

15 posted 2001-11-01 05:41 AM

Very nicely written. i can feel the tension, just by reading the words. =)

Amber Dawn
Junior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 22
Minnesota

16 posted 2001-11-01 07:18 AM

Thank you so much, everyone, for your very kind welcome!

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

17 posted 2001-11-01 09:00 AM

Very good. Welcome to passions.

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

18 posted 2001-11-02 01:28 PM

Hi Amber Dawn,

Welcome to Passions,

This is an awesome first post, enjoyed very much and hoping to see more of your work,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

19 posted 2001-11-02 03:09 PM

Amber Dawn~ A perfect description....those moments are very trying to the soul. Fragile indeed.

Welcome to Passions!

Make yourself at home, spread your name throughout the forum and have fun!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

20 posted 2001-11-02 04:51 PM

Amber,
Welcome and a great first post. We all will look for your post and comments.

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

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