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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2001-10-31 09:01 AM


Heartbroken was I, when I saw him laying there
A couple of years ago, he lived with my grandma
Pete was her special bird for many, many years
People say, Pete use to talk before she passed away
Yet, I had never heard him say not even one word

He was a pretty old bird, so I have been told
After my grandma died, I got to have him
Losing her was just too much for him to take
Often I would try to get him to start talking again
Words I would repeat to him every single day
Eventually I had hoped that he would talk again
Eagerly I waited for him to repeat what I said
Now he is dead too and I'll never hear him talk
© By Sue 10/29/01   (Pete passed away10/28/01)


© Copyright 2001 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2001-10-31 09:04 AM


SmartChick,
A well written sad tale.

Startime
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Canada
2 posted 2001-10-31 09:07 AM


I bet he is talking his little heart out, with your grandmother, right now. I wept when I read this poem. Sometimes animals get so attached to us that they never recover losing us. Thank you so much for sharing Pete with us. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2001-10-31 09:41 AM


Oh, how sad, I bet he is happier now back with Grandma.
Hugs
Sandra

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
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Tennessee
4 posted 2001-11-01 08:24 PM


This is such a heart write dear poet. I truly feel for your loss here. I'm so sorry. A very special tribute to both a loved one and a beloved pet. Bless you. {Hugs}.

Sincerely,
Regina

wayoutwalt
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5 posted 2001-11-01 08:27 PM


the bird is free...can i say that?
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