Open Poetry #16 |
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A Mother’s Frozen Tears |
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Keith Morgan Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 114Md |
A Mother’s Frozen Tears The sadness of a woman Yearning to be a mother in her eternal sleep Dreaming and silently singing A song of life And what a beautiful voice she has A song that carries throughout time and space Finally falling upon the slumbering ears of an omnipotent Being The sleeper has awakened! Father of all that is Creator of life and consciousness Hearing the cries of a distant child Smiling upon her as one of His most loved And as a Father is apt to do He grants His daughter that dreaming wish With a wave of a hand And the power of a thought The universe twinkles to life As the heavenly bodies heed the voice of their Father But one has stirred for a different reason It is the childish affection of a flowery breeze That awakens Mother Earth Yawning from an ageless sleep Her eyes, the color of the deep blue sea Slowly focus to absorb her surroundings The answer to her dreams And she knew this was daughter Spring The sweetest and most adored of all her children Spring, whose presence signifies the beauty of life A special kind of beauty that thaws out the deepest cold Complimenting a peaceful essence rivaling only Heaven But as beauty so often does She vanishes without being seen Leaving behind tears of sadness As a warm but temperamental breeze Embraces His mother with a fiery love Mother Earth lovingly returns the embrace of her son, Summer Whose presence brightens the sky And saturates the air with the waters of life Feeding Mother Earth With a habitat of lush greenery But a strong jealous wind chases away Summer Not wanting to share the love of her mother Fall has arrived And her presence causes the trees to bow And the leaves to dance in celebration A colorful display of greeting to the mother of all Oh! How wonderfully delightful to the eyes she is to Mother Earth As the dancing leaves drape her in the luxurious coat of Autumn* Reminding Mother Earth to give thanks to the Great One Harvesting the fruits of her labor as an offering While gently rocking her daughter, Fall, to sleep Singing a sweet lullaby of promise and hope But suddenly, a strange sensation overcomes Mother Earth A chill that threatens her very embodiment An icy touch that reaches the core of her existence Slowly returning her to that eternal sleep As Fall slips from her mother’s loving hands Becoming tear drops of ice Descending from the sky Before cruelly being blown away by a cold harsh wind That smiles upon His Mother Piercing her heart with icicles of love Adorning her feet with frozen shackles of contempt A forgotten child can be fickle at times And as Mother Earth slowly succumbs to the will of Winter She now reflects upon her son Perhaps angry at being the last born Or maybe his expression of love has an ultimate purpose A love that only a Mother and child can understand Mother Earth then smiles Seeing the irony in her thoughts While Winter freezes time and a dream With a final kiss As Mother Earth awaits the return of her first born Marcel [This message has been edited by Dusk Treader (edited 10-30-2001).] |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Interesting tale of the seasons! A good read, the begining reminds me of the tale of Persephone. ![]() "A hard, cold wisom is required for goodness to accomplish good. Goodness without wisdom always accomplishes evil" - Robert Heilein |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such a seasoned write...You have captured our earth and her seasons so well. Nicely done. thank you... |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, this is beautiful!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahhh Keith, our Earth's Seasons so beautifully captured.... Well done! Maree ![]() |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Very beautiful write. Dawn |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was so intricately done to weave the seasons with color and imagery, beautifully done. I really enjoyed this one and off to my library it goes. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Amused Cupid Junior Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 40 |
This is an awesome poem, gave me a vision of the seasons to ponder upon. ![]() |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Keith, Oh I LOVE this!!! I really really do! This is going into my library ![]() ![]() Hugs, Tara |
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