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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-10-30 08:37 AM



The unique fruit of
Ego's cornucopia
Ripens in the mind.

© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-10-30 08:43 AM



so feed then the grape
allow not fermentation
that we know the truth

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-10-30 08:50 AM


your poetic mind
is like harvesting Eden
orchard of wisdom

~*~

*winkiewinkie*
me

This distance has shown how the road remains alone
Now I'm looking in my life ... for a truth that is my own.

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3 posted 2001-10-30 08:55 AM




Embracing Eden
Through your wonderful pure words
Your loving heart writes

BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! A cornucopia of inspiration fills your marvelous haiku! I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2001-10-30 08:56 AM


Sunshine,
I like yours better than mine. *L*

JM,
So would you like to take a ride on Randy?
Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-10-30 08:59 AM


Noah,
May love and light always shine upon you!
Thank you.

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-10-30 09:01 AM


OF COURSE ... your saddle or mine ROFL  

Shall we go to Shangri-La?
*WW*  

Startime
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7 posted 2001-10-30 09:05 AM


with words sweet to taste
your pen shares the ripest fruit
harvest of your heart

mmmm not too good, for I am not used to writing these but this does tell you how wonderful your work is to me. BRAVO!!! You write such beautiful emotions.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sunshine
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8 posted 2001-10-30 09:15 AM



Sy, You just Love that you inspire....

me knows!

Golden are his Keys
with which he gauges justice
I still keep the Write

texasrose
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9 posted 2001-10-30 09:19 AM


Sy, beautiful Haiku!  Such inspiration in this.
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2001-10-30 09:42 AM


Startime,
Very good, nice one.

JM,
Mine and on my way. WW S

Sunshine,
Thank you sweet. *L*

Texasrose,
Thank you.

vandana
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11 posted 2001-10-30 10:56 AM


enjoyed
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2001-10-30 12:10 PM


Vandana, Thank you

Nan
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13 posted 2001-10-30 02:15 PM


A unique fruitloop
Unleashed creativity
For new days' breakfast

Sunshine
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14 posted 2001-10-30 02:28 PM




NAN!

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15 posted 2001-10-30 03:04 PM


Wow !! I really enjoyed this succulent Haiku.....like a tiny little fruit cup...leaves you wanting more. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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