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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2001-10-30 08:14 AM

Paper Heart

My love flows through the silken ink
from depths of poet’s quill
And through a dreamers fantasy
That memories instill

My love is scrolled in verses
Softly spoken to the world
In paper dreams my fragile heart
So willingly unfurled

My love is etched on pages
And in constellations’ stars
For eyes around the universe
To gaze into my heart

My love exists in morning mist
In sunlit drops of dew
Inscribed within poetic phrases
Born in thoughts of you

How can a written love bestow
The warmth and joyful bliss
From poems laced in lover’s ink
That scrolls a paper kiss

The truth will be revealed to me
When sonnets I impart
Unfold sincerity that pours
From out my paper heart

Perhaps the poetry will warm
The passion that you feel
Perhaps a paper love will turn
Into a love for real

Elizabeth Santos

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 10-30-2001).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-10-30 08:28 AM

How you turn a poem into a crystalline adventure...

thank you, Lady Santos...

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

2 posted 2001-10-30 08:29 AM

love, no matter how it births is a beautiful thing, and I so enjoyed this...thank you for this one.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-10-30 11:16 PM

Elizabeth~

I LOVE THIS ! !

'How can a written love bestow
The warmth and joyful bliss
From poems laced in lover’s ink
That scrolls a paper kiss

The truth will be revealed to me
When sonnets I impart
Unfold sincerity that pours
From out my paper heart

Perhaps the poetry will warm
The passion that you feel
Perhaps a paper love will turn
Into a love for real'

Oh .... it's just wonderful ! !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2001-10-30 11:43 PM

Liz: Just totally beguiling! Finding one of your poems is like finding a diamond!

Betty Lou Hebert

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2001-10-30 11:47 PM

Absolutely brilliant, Liz. Long live the Queen....

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2001-10-31 12:03 PM

This flows so nicely, and has such feeling, I think that paper heart just started beating.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2001-10-31 12:41 PM

Unsurpassed excellence... to repeat my favorite parts would be to copy the poem... This is fantastic!

Amber Dawn
Junior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 22
Minnesota

8 posted 2001-10-31 01:00 PM

Gentle, delicate, and beautiful. I truly enjoyed this writing.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-10-31 07:24 PM

quote:
Perhaps the poetry will warm
The passion that you feel
Perhaps a paper love will turn
Into a love for real

this is the dream of poets everywhere. . . and no one tells of it better than you dear Lady. . .

beautifully done. . . thank you. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

10 posted 2001-10-31 08:11 PM

Thank you all for your very kind comments
Liz

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