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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
 I’m making love to my muse- lying face up; parallel but clandestine- and proverbial dots tumble all-around my eyes. The curtains are drawn but the Windows are open. Microsoft air borders my flesh. The sheets are wet. Animated movements soon become an italicized passage. We are centered and aligned. I’m rapt verse to your gratis sonnet. Your arms rumple pages, my lips flood into lines, our legs wrap the text. Our margins narrow in- blank spaces become tinted peaks… we quiver in abandon. I am liquid paper but you, my muse, are my indelible ink. photo: Vintage Hollywood Photography -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
 I am liquid paper but you, my muse, are my indelible ink. loves these line aplenty... regards, sudhir |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oooh I really really like this! my lips flood into lines, our legs wrap the text. Phew! Maree |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am liquid paper but you, my muse, are my indelible ink. ====================== very clever write Lady S... creative anology and use of metaphor what poet doesnt love the thought of mixing passion with words... like rolling naked in the classics *L*  very well done Poetess jm This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
WOW, this just makes me want to jump out of the computer chair and clap. Loving every bit of it. Sandra |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Sudhir, thank you kind sir. Maree, you know the inspiration for this one was right in front of me all the time I was typing! Thank you for replying. Janet Marie, exactly my feelings. I mean if you can't have fun while you're writing why bother? Thank you for peeking in. Sandra, well, you just go right on if it makes you feel good! That's my main goal to spread joy and sunshine wherever I go. Forgive the cliché! Thank you for replying. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Soooooo delightfully sensual and romantic! (sigh) Every whisper, every spoken word writes a lovers sonnet for a lifetime! I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You are a true romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet lady, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
OH MY GOD, ......... thank you for this one, ah, yes, thank you |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Shallot, Very well done! Fantastic poem. =)I can sense the romatic in you, yes indeed. As I myself am one, I found it quite entertaining to read... I absolutely love how you took poetry, our form of expression - our way of life, and applied it too something so sensual and intimate. It is a very vived picture. *stands up and applauds!* Keep at it my lovely lass. You're one good write. Sincerely, Titus "Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I love this one, is so sexy. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - I love this - very clever and moving! As usual, you write so exquistely~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound...or a smiling mouth" ~Kahlil Gibran~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 10-30-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
superbly done my friend. . . I like the comparisons here. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Thank you, I usually address each one personally, but I'm not feeling very well this evening. Thank you for reading my words, if they made you feel good, that's all that is important. God bless you all! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady--Clever...the thought behind this, unique..add a touch of the sensual ...and walla..wonderful! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Once again, your choice of artwork is perfect. Love b/w. Wouldn't it be incredible to make love on a bed of poetry written by the two of you...on rice paper. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Martie, thank you for replying, I appreciate it! Duncan, well, yes, yes it would. That is a sensual image. Thank you for replying. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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