Open Poetry #16 |
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Chromatic aberration |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia ![]() |
Suffering from chromatic aberration, bouncing wavelengths of light off dark, a rainbow spectrum in disarray, day fading to night, blended non-synchronicity, frightening duplicity. I cover my eyes and look away from the darkness that surrounds me every waking day and sleepless night. I've lost my magic flashlight too many times. From now on, I will keep it in my shirt pocket closer to my heart, to guide and lighten my perilous pathway past the tombs with outstretched hands, souls reaching out with pleading eyes, begging for truthful answers, not more layers of lies. But the only answer I have is the one my heart was born with from love's passion. Only unfettered love and unbridled compassion yield enough bright light to guide a heart safely home each day and night, and shield one from chromatic aberration. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Love that line about the magic flashlight. I enjoy reading poetry that is original, such as this one. Thank you. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Suffering from chromatic aberration, bouncing wavelengths of light off dark, a rainbow spectrum in disarray, day fading to night, blended non-synchronicity, frightening duplicity. I cover my eyes and look away from the darkness that surrounds me every waking day and sleepless night. I've lost my magic flashlight too many times. From now on, I will keep it in my shirt pocket closer to my heart, to guide and lighten my perilous pathway past the tombs with outstretched hands, souls reaching out with pleading eyes, begging for truthful answers, not more layers of lies. ============================= I love the vocabulary you have used to create the vivid imagery and express the depth of emotion... this is a very cool write MS well done ![]() jm This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
How incredibly unique...I love the magic flashlight it makes me see things of fantasy that cannot usually be seen. BRAVO!!! A magnificent poem. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lady, thanks for reading this. The title seemed a bit awkward to me at first, but not the poem itself. Glad you liked it. JM, thanks! It always pleases me when my words and imagery please you. Startime, yes, I seem to need that magical flashlight every day lately. I almost titled the poem the magic flashlight, but left it with the thought that sparked the idea. |
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