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Amused Cupid
Junior Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 40

0 posted 2001-10-29 10:19 PM

Look...

Look away, past your thoughts,
Past obstacles that jump and sway,
Know the me of emotions deep inside,
Me, who loves you like an oceans strength.

Look at life, see the We of dreams,
Life with you, is the where of destiny,
You a man, a rich full bounty of devotion,
Man of depth, and keeper of my love for you.

Look within, see the wonderful,
See all the treasures alive today,
Treasures making everyday special,
Everyday through you, I live to cherish.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2001-10-29 10:33 PM

The words of pure love spoken so well in a
very enchanting "we" way. Nice poem...

wornways
Member

since 2001-10-18

Posts 204
CA, USA

2 posted 2001-10-30 01:00 AM

hey i like this piece. the use of language has given me some idears. read it a few times, not sure i understand fully, but i just like the way this flows. sort of a peaceful acceptance of love and that which comes with it, an acceptance of the love within felt for another, and the vivid enlightened richness of living that permeates every new experience in the wake of this love. hrrm... i hope this thing you have continues to blossom and beautify.

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2001-10-30 01:28 AM

AC

great write you have here. you write
your feelings very clearly, and in
such a way that made me smile. take care.
amy

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

4 posted 2001-10-30 12:49 PM

Amused Cupid,

This is a most delightful poem. I hope he is able to "look" as you have asked him to.

Dawn

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2001-10-30 01:05 PM

Aww, this was very cute. It's the ultimate when you stop living selfishly and think of the "we".

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

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