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Those eyes.....
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Those eyes..... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Listening to sounds of life far away. Reflecting on another day passed. Thinking of a moment which has imprinted my mind’s eye. Those eyes......I cannot forget those eyes... She was sitting there...across from me as we rocked along the rails. I could not help but notice her. After all, legs, so long, So....... Her fingers deftly skimming over an issue of Cosmo...so fine. Painted such a passionate color, my back aching to be touched by them. Long flowing hair.....Oh how my eyes could be brushed by it as she swayed. My heart quickens at just the thought of this....my mouth becomes dry. Watching her, over the top of my paper, afraid to be toooo obvious. Small beads of nervous sweat falling down my back. Shifting my legs from one side, to the other, can’t stop it. The fullness of her blouse, I imagine lying there, resting my ears. Listening to the passion spurred heart, the sudden intake of a breath held. A soft moan escaping moist lips...My ears don’t want to move. So captivated by her, I miss my stop....the journey continues. A kid blocks my view.....Move it....can’t you see I’m busy, my mind says. Finally, an unobstructed view, my gaze continues. Ears so delightful and small. Waiting for a nibble or a kiss. I bite my lip. A fragrance assaults my senses, invisible feelers grasping me. I feel as though I am being beckoned to her side, I am afraid to move. So delicate a face...perfection, a cover girl look....which mag? And beneath immaculate brows, accenting sensual cheeks, her eyes.... So inviting, calling me....Saying she knows I am here, she feels my thoughts. Saying she is not easy, that she needs love, that she is love. I imagine her lying there, those eyes calling me to her. I imagine them closing as passion overcomes her. I can never forget those eyes....I wake each morning to them in my mind. I miss those eyes..... |
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Wanda Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461 |
Magnus; Very sensual and romatic. You are back to writing your "train" poems again. :-) Wanda (Enjoyed it immensely) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Darn You Barry! And...I was just getting my breathing back to normal !! Oh my....can't talk just yet. Later, hugs, Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Singing rails of love....always such fun. I was almost born on a train...Imagine that. Thanx Wanda... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey what about me!!!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy....I hate to say it but....it only get worse...I assure you of that.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooo sensually beautiful! Isn't it just amazing ho so many different things can inspire us? (sigh) I too have seen Cosmopolitan magazine once, those ads always have L'Oreal and Maybelline ads that have such beautiful eyes! (big hugggssssss) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend! Your train rides are always filled with such love and fantasy! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 10-29-2001).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Noah....hope you had a nice birthday. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Thanks so much for asking, sweet friend! I spent most of my day at home, but my brother came over, who now works at MCI, and we had a good dinner at a salad buffet restaurant and watched O' Brother, Where Art Thou? That is a wonderful movie! (big hugggsssss) Thank you so much, it was you and all my other friends who made this my happiest birthday! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Whew...what a warm way to start the morning. Senually beautiful, Magnus.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Karen....happy to put a pleasant smile on your face early in the day....sort of set the mood for you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I could say just one word in reply...but Nahh, can't do that....Thanx Vandana... hope you continue to enjoy my posts... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Whew! I don't know what I'd do if I caught a guy looking at me like that...Marry him? Oh yea I did that! Heating up the railways perfectly Magnus! Very seductive read. Gotta go find my hubby now! Sincerely, Regina |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Good for you Regina...glad you enjoyed the read. |
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