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0 posted 2001-10-30 02:57 PM



Cupid Girl
By: Noah Eaton
10/30/01

There’s a sweet heavenly cupid girl
Who longs to rest close to my heart
She rests high on cotton candy clouds
Whispering love letters afar

She has no bow or arrow, but she touches hearts just the same
She blows kisses from her lips, floating softly in the air
Golden glitter lights the skies, and turns into flocks of sparrows and butterflies
Kissing my heart and melting it, as her whispers rustle back her angelic hair

She wears a sky blue dress, her hair is long and golden
She smiles every day when I dream of her and long to hold her
She blows kisses while I’m sleeping, so I dream I’m at her side
Making love to her, feeling my heart flutter

She’s my sweet beautiful cupid girl
Who longs to be my lifetime valentine
I dream ever so much of holding her close
And falling in love with her for all time…

© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-30 04:35 PM


And soon she will be more than a dream, for your openess to finding her will bring her to you. Very beautiful, Noah.
Sandra

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2 posted 2001-10-30 06:40 PM



This is a sweet beauty of a poem!
You're just adorable, you know that?!  

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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3 posted 2001-10-30 06:47 PM


Hi Sweetie! You totally drew me into this poem , I love this stanza
"There’s a sweet heavenly cupid girl
Who longs to rest close to my heart
She rests high on cotton candy clouds
Whispering love letters afar"

Wow, you write so incredibly good, Keep the wonderful, romantic poems coming.
<3<3<3<3<3

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4 posted 2001-10-30 07:59 PM


Noah,

     You are such an amazing writer. So romantic and sweet.  One day you will meet your love... and what a lucky girl she'll be.

Hugs,
Tara

Don't marry for money...  You can borrow it cheaper!

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5 posted 2001-10-30 08:03 PM


Noah...this is so sweet....one day...you just wait!!  Love is going to come knocking on your door.  Nancy.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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6 posted 2001-10-31 06:51 AM


Noah...You are someone's all year Valentine! So lucky she will be in discovering you!
Love and Hugs!

Sincerely,
Regina

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