Open Poetry #16 |
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Thinkin in the rain |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida ![]() |
My thoughts seem to go into overdrive When I lay in bed and it rains outside Makes me long for someone to cuddle Tempted to barefootedly play in the puddles My mother was always preching about germs She said If I played in dirty water I'd get ringworm I used to question as a little girl As to why it would rain? My theory was the clouds were crying After something caused them pain Somedays the streets would be flooded And those clouds would turn gray Thought it was the clouds expressing their gloom When the sun went away I think about my flower garden outside And how they love slight rain showers My roses are thristy for hydration But too much rain will drown my flowers Rain makes people look appealing Skin glistening slick and wet I must say it looks much better Than being hot and beaded with sweat See my thoughts twist in my head so deep I give in to the humming sound and fall fast asleep |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Joanna, I love the rain so much too; it always makes me feel so refreshing and comfortable! (big hugggssssss) Your beautiful inspirations are always filled with such love and beauty! I love it! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Joanna, I love when it rains... the sound of the raindrops hitting my window puts me to sleep every time ![]() ![]() Hugs, Tara Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
RosePetal, I love the scent of rain and I love the sound of it hitting the roof when I am snuggled up to my hubby in bed. I really liked this poem. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Rain does many wonderful things....and setting the mood for love is one of them. Your poem brings much to mind about a very wet subject. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I love this poem. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed this Joanna....hugs, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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